jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Friday 27th October 2006 6:00pm for Chapter 6

OUTSTANDING STORY SO FAR!!!! Ok I completely missed this gem when I was going through your fanfics, my bad. This story is so cool and I can't wait to see what happens next. I love how you've written the entire story through Narcissa Blacks point of view, I don't think I've ever read another story that does that. Do keep up the amazingly awesome and outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)

David Stanley posted a comment on Friday 27th October 2006 5:33pm for Chapter 6

Nice little surprise Harry dropped there. I wounder what Tommy will do when he finds out. Great work. Looking forward to more.

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Friday 27th October 2006 4:48pm for Chapter 6

Actually, Hermione is *still* only in *second* place on the Target List, despite holding the Slytherin proxy. Hermione Granger would be a prime target simply by being either associated with Harry or being a muggleborn witch; the fact that she is married to Harry, and is Lady Slytherin (even though Hermione holds the proxy, *Harry* still holds the Head of House title; Hermione is his acknowledged wife and is Lady Slytherin for that reason) is *not* going to make her any more of a target than Harry, simply because Harry is responsible for all of it.

Besides, Hermione addressed this issue in Chapter Four; Harry will *always* be the Primary Target for no other reason than his having the unmitigated gall of frustrating Moldie at every turn. Hermione will trail immediately behind Harry simply by being not just a muggleborn witch, but by being *the* Muggleborn Witch (remember, it's Hermione that fried most of the OWL scores, not Harry; she's hated/loathed/despised for that reason alone); she can move no further up the target list while Harry's alive (her relationship to Harry is utterly irrelevant in that sense), so her holding of the Slytherin proxy is likewise irrelevant from a targeting POV.

Bethany1 posted a comment on Friday 27th October 2006 2:55pm for Chapter 6

You are evil. This was wonderful and I can't wait to see their reactions!!

Manatheron posted a comment on Friday 27th October 2006 2:27pm for Chapter 6

Oh yes, THAT little Bombshell is going to Cause a HELLACIOUS amount of Chaos...

-{Evil Grin}-

I can't wait to read it!

James Barber posted a comment on Friday 27th October 2006 1:34pm for Chapter 6

OOOHHH got a mudblood in the most idiotic pureblood seat of them all!

great story, can just see them falling in love and lust...

skywalker64089 posted a comment on Friday 27th October 2006 11:36am for Chapter 6

Little bombshell!?!?!?!??!?!? Try nuclear warhead. :) Awesome finish for the chapter. Seems like Harry's thinking everything out very carefully.

S.

Steven Bae posted a comment on Friday 27th October 2006 11:04am for Chapter 6

Sorry. Meant to delete most of the post.
I meant to only say that I liked the chapter and ask that question. The comment about the perspectives was what I wanted to say before I realized in who's perspective this chapter was written in.

Steven Bae posted a comment on Friday 27th October 2006 11:03am for Chapter 6

Ok. I liked the chapter in general but there was one thing that started to bother me. The story seemed to be told in multiple perspectives.
I am curious. Why did you decide to write this in the perspective of Narcissa?

Uldihaa posted a comment on Friday 27th October 2006 10:20am for Chapter 6

A bombshell!? That wasn't just a bombshell, that was a pair of bunker-busters! I LOVED it! First Harry claims the Slytherin seat, then he appoints Hermione, a muggle-born, as his proxy. I wonder if anyone ruptured a blood-vessel...Would be amusing to see one of the dark-supporting members drop dead of apoplexy >)

Such a fun chapter, can't wait for the next.

azureguy86 posted a comment on Friday 27th October 2006 10:03am for Chapter 6

love the ending a muggleborn in the slytherin seat just pricelss

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Friday 27th October 2006 9:43am for Chapter 6

Good Chapter, update soon I cant wait to see what changes they make.

MPF

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Friday 27th October 2006 8:33am for Chapter 6

Your stories are always fun! But him getting Slytherin's seat leagally and then using Hermione as his proxy! Whatever will Riddle think! A "mudblood" (hate that term!) in his seat!

Bravissimo

Monkey

Tumshie posted a comment on Friday 27th October 2006 5:50am for Chapter 6

Another excellent chapter, once again I have to say well done Keith.

liquidfyre posted a comment on Friday 27th October 2006 5:31am for Chapter 6

you should be strung up by your TOENAILS for ending that chapter that way OH MY GOD you are a sick twisted saadistic Weasel

on that note damn good chapter and keep up the good work hopefully the end of htat cliffhangerwill be forthcoming most shortly

hint hint nudge nudge

The Resident posted a comment on Friday 27th October 2006 5:31am for Chapter 6

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. That was one hell of a bombshell. Harry's got the Wizengamot so stacked with his proxies that a whole lot of fun can be had in the upcoming votes. I also liked the scene between Narcissa and Draco. Hopefully he'll wake up and smell the roses. Keep up the excellent work. Oh, yes, as always, please, update soon.

Alex2877 posted a comment on Friday 27th October 2006 5:21am for Chapter 6

Yeah it was. So far the story is pretty good but this most recent chapter was too short otherwise please keep with the story

xardoth posted a comment on Friday 27th October 2006 5:17am for Chapter 6

Ah, good laughs at the end. Hope you update this and other works soon, you've got some great stuff going. I've been trying to find more works like what you've written but most of it is horribly written or abandoned years ago. If you've got any reccomendations.. I could use em.

Ekaterin posted a comment on Friday 27th October 2006 4:50am for Chapter 6

great ending. A muggleborn for the house of slytherin! thanks for the chapter

Ben Russell-Gough posted a comment on Friday 27th October 2006 4:23am for Chapter 6

There is only one comment that I can make at this time. A muggleborn sitting in the seat of Salazar Slytehrin? Oh Harry... You really like stirring it up, don't you? ;-)