Donald Deutsch posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 12:08pm for Chapter 10

I stand up and applaud you on this story Keith. Great work, and I loved it. Now, can you please possibly complete Three for all? Please Please Please Please, I am craving to find out what happens with that story.

Stygius posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 11:53am for Chapter 10

nice ending with beautiful morals.... u never did tell us how many children harry/cissa and harry/mia had... and not much info on hermione besides that fact that see won an award to finding out what "makes" magic --- oh, i get it.... oops

congrats and i hope to see more from you soon.

have you thought abou a harry/female(harry) fic... yes... i know how that sounds.. but try reading "the girl who lived" by SilverAegis.

i know he has abandoned it, but i was hoping to see someone else take something similar up, so far no luck...

or otherwise, how about harry/hestia (who is another member of the order - around tonks age - that we know little to nothign about in cannon)..

cheers,

Crys posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 11:12am for Chapter 10

Touching wrap-up.

Not sure I quite believe how "reformed" Draco was, but then again I don't remember all the details of it.

Thanks for sharing the story with us.

redjacobson posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 10:26am for Chapter 10

nicely done; although I'll admit I have a hard time picturing anybody related to Pansy as a Milf; I guess Ron wouldn't agree *GRIN*

What's next on the agenda? It Started One Summer? Please?

Red

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 10:23am for Chapter 10

A delightful coda that wraps up the story very nicely. I love the idea of the Malfoys, Weaseleys, and Potter-Blacks working together for the Light; that has to be the most galling series of events possible to Lucius in whatever afterlife he ended up in (IMHO, he got Hell if he was lucky, he deserves to be sent to the like of Chernebog).

c3markh posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 10:15am for Chapter 10

Love the story and have followed it from the beginning. Thanks for writing; I have read and enjoyed every HP FF story that you have written (that I have found that is ). I enjoy your style of writing a story very much.

sinkingboat posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 10:14am for Chapter 10

nice story

KenF posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 10:06am for Chapter 10

Nice wrap-up.

morriganscrow posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 9:59am for Chapter 10

A lovely, and appropriate, ending to a wonderful story.
Thanks for a great read, and for the hours of hard work you put into your excellent writing. It is appreciated.

Philipe posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 8:52am for Chapter 10

Congrats Keith.

It was an excellent ending to a great story.. i missed hermione a little on this chapter, even tho i know the story is related from Cissa point of view.. none the less, you continue to write beautiful stories, for wich i'm sure i not the only one who is really grateful.. I hope you enjoyed writing as much as i enjoyed reading it..

Best wishes to you and the lovely wife..
P.

Ken Warner posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 7:45am for Chapter 10

excellent and enjoyable - less angst than Family Matters, and the story better for it.

loved again the way you turned anti-heros in to real heros

thanks so much for sharing
warmest regards

Daniel Hensley posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 7:06am for Chapter 10

Very well done I applaud you. I love it.

Amamama posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 7:04am for Chapter 10

Nice end to a cool story. Loved the remodelling of the wizarding world, the weeding of bigotry and unfair laws, the love and acceptance.

Thank you.

Cliff Bryner posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 6:24am for Chapter 10

As always, my compliments. I have become a big fan, and faithful reader. Please keep these stories coming. Too bad we can't put them on some school's corriculum (sp?). Maybe we can.

Kaerion posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 6:02am for Chapter 10

I'd say you have every reason in the world to be happy with this! It's an absolutely wonderful story, definitely up to your usual standards. I might even have to say it's above your usual standards, but that might be because I have a much easier time dealing with a Harry like you wrote here, who takes charge and deals with things, than the Harry you've used in a few of your other (also brilliant) stories.

I also can't remember ever reading a story from Narcissa's point of view before, and while I usually shy away from redeemed!Draco stories, with very, very few exceptions (I just can't make myself like the little shite), you pulled it off both beautifully and believably.

And much, much kudos for mentioning Randi and the JREF! I've never seen it mentioned in a fic before, though I don't know if that's because people haven't heard of him (and the prize), or haven't thought about the possibility, but that part really made me laugh! I can only hope you make people curious about him, the foundation and the prize, and that his message is spread even further. Oh, and if the HP books were real, I'm also absolutely convinced that Hermione would be his new favorite person in the world! Just don't ever introduce him to Luna. ;)

Nick5 posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 5:47am for Chapter 10

Very nice ending.

Patches posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 5:24am for Chapter 10

A very good epilog. Thank you for writing this. I have enjoyed reading it I hope to see another story soon. You have an individual style I really enjoy. Looking forward to your next missive! pms

Ben Russell-Gough posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 4:04am for Chapter 10

Overall a good story; better than it could be. I enjoyed many parts of it particularly but there were no real downsides.

This was a very intersting view of Narcissa (who we really only see for the first time, other than as Lucius' oh-so-stereotypical wife, at the beginning of HBP). I found your vision of her in this story compelling and attractive. You feel sympathy for her situation and are rooting for her from very early on.

Given when this was started, I find it quite interesting that your versions of Narcissa and Draco are very much in harmony with how they are shown in HBP.

JKR has pointed out that her books are essentially from Harry's point of view. It is interseting to see events from someone else's point of view for once.

BenRG's Rating: 8/10

Treck posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 3:07am for Chapter 10

BRAVO! Damn that was well done.

Now answer the 64 million galleon question... "Whats next?"

Adam posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 2:59am for Chapter 10

a very nice wrap up to a very good story, well done.