Kalen Darkmoon posted a comment on Saturday 21st July 2007 5:56pm for Chapter 10

Beautiful story. I'm glad to see another of your great works completed.

Ezra'eil posted a comment on Friday 13th July 2007 4:15pm for Chapter 10

I liked it....Have you hought about rewriting it in a different P.O.V maybe like Harry's or, starting form when he gets back, in Hermione's?

Jimbocous posted a comment on Monday 28th May 2007 4:45am for Chapter 10

Thanks for another fun and engaging story. Nice ending as well, a bit Heinleinesque, if you will, but that's no criticism from my perspective.

Steve Stephan posted a comment on Monday 21st May 2007 1:20pm for Chapter 10

Excellent way to end a story. I absolutely loathe epilogue's that span 150 years and give you no place to imagine what happened afterward.

atlantis-rob posted a comment on Saturday 19th May 2007 4:28am for Chapter 10

Great finish Keith, wow. A completed story. Excellent job on the setup in the last chapter and kudos to ASV on the fight scene. Cheers!

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Thursday 17th May 2007 11:02am for Chapter 10

Harry: Now you know how I feel when I look at your mother.

Draco: Yes I do, Dad.

Ron: *THUD*

Why would Ron faint? It's not that it's younger man/older woman (remember, Harry+Narcissa+Hermione has been going on, mostly under his own nose, for quite some time; further, he himself is dating Angelique Parkinson, Pansy's mum) but that *Draco Malfoy* has come so far, not just to be able to leave behind Lucius Malfoy, but he is actually paying Proper Homage to the very reason that Draco Malfoy *is* who he is today: Harry Potter himself, who just happens to be married to his mother. If it weren't for the fact that Harry himself would argue against it, I could indeed see Draco changing his last name to *Potter*. Then there *is* the rather hilarious fact that Harry is, in fact, younger than Draco....

Wolfric posted a comment on Wednesday 16th May 2007 9:53am for Chapter 10

I really enjoyed this story. I look forward to any further efforts you care to share. It usually suits me very well for authors to see a story through to a conclusion and this one is no exception. I have pretty much enjoyed all of your works so please keep writing and sharing. Thanks W.

gadriam posted a comment on Wednesday 16th May 2007 5:14am for Chapter 10

*enervate*

'cuz this is a stunning piece of writing. I can rain sunshine on the story itself all year without being quite done, but what did me in this time was the simple difference in the writing styles. From the formal, yet warm style of an intelligent, upperclass woman in love, to the simpler, more masculine form of an intelligent man determined to uphold his love. The final lines highlighted the relationship between them.

All stories must come to an end, and this one came to a perfect finish. I'll miss the thrill of new chapters, but i'll have this story leatherbound in my bookshelf in two days. I refuse to lose it.
Thank you.
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Rheya Ramsey posted a comment on Tuesday 15th May 2007 9:42pm for Chapter 10

Nice story. Only one loose end was left. The Dursley's. Surely Vernon and Petunia, at least, should have been prosecuted for selling their nephew, handing him over to people they knew would kill him. Oh, well. Very, very enjoyable, anyway.

rkross posted a comment on Tuesday 15th May 2007 10:50am for Chapter 10

that was a great story. Keep writing

Christopher Patton posted a comment on Tuesday 15th May 2007 1:32am for Chapter 10

Wow, two parts in one day. I like the ending its well done and ties up the loose strings nicely.

I also like how Narcissa came to realize how much more she could love if she just let herself do so. That was a very nice touch as well as show what kind of an impact the she had on the wizarding world from Harry's POV.

Thanks.

James Benfield posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 11:43pm for Chapter 10

great story overall, keep up the good work.

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 11:42pm for Chapter 10

Lovely, a great story, and always nice to see good Narcissa, and loved the way you had Harry and Hermione end up with them both. Just great, and can't wait to read more of your writings in the future.

djo posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 9:13pm for Chapter 10

Great story - I loved reading it (and not only once...)

Princess Fictoria posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 5:19pm for Chapter 10

great story. totally loved the pov and pairings... very unique and a wonderful use of an often ignored character. I look forward to reading more of your great stories as you continue to show us all why you are a premier hp fandom author.

CoyoteScion posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 4:33pm for Chapter 10

Thank you for another wonderful read.

hpssslashfan posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 4:33pm for Chapter 10

Beautifully written sentimentality and nice ending wrapping up most of the loose threads.

:-)

PS: I especially liked the battle scene in the previous chapter.

Filodea posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 4:23pm for Chapter 10

A very interesting story. I never really thought of Harry with Narcissa, but you made it reasonable, even if I still have trouble believing it. I do like the ending, because I feel that is what husbands and wives should be to each other, friends.

hptrump posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 1:23pm for Chapter 10

Now this is a screwed up story.

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 12:31pm for Chapter 10

Great story. How many kids did they have total?

Thanks for writing
MPF