Noble Korhedron posted a comment on Monday 23rd June 2014 4:26pm for Trouble Brews at Hogwarts

WHAT. THE. BLUE. FUCK. WAS. THAT!?! :-O I would've THOUGHT Lily could learn from the actions of her sister; seems a violent temper is an Evans family trait. Nevertheless, if I caught her going after Hermione I'd knock her flat, woman or not!!

Cassandra30 posted a comment on Wednesday 10th August 2011 3:14am for Trouble Brews at Hogwarts

Wonderful! Great chapter! Very inventive of you. Spoiled Lily makes her appearance. A lot like Molly as well.

malimed posted a comment on Saturday 30th April 2011 10:51pm for Trouble Brews at Hogwarts

this is a great story, and i felt that the handover between authors was fairly seamless (something that is very hard to do). i don't like what you're doing to lily here, though. i'm really hoping that there's some kind of hex or curse on her, because slapping your child is a big deal. the fact that he was abused previously makes it an even bigger deal. i think it would be appropriate for her to talk seriously with hermione and even for her to talk to harry about her concerns. i think it would even be appropriate for them to argue about it. i don't like where you're taking the character, though.

Mionefan posted a comment on Thursday 27th January 2011 10:50pm for Trouble Brews at Hogwarts

I wasn't going to comment on this chapter, but I feel that I must. Most people (fan fiction writers) have always thought/written that Lily was a much better woman than you've portrayed in this chapter. I, however, tend to agree that Petunia and Harry were exhibiting an Evans trait. Harry's angst driven year (OOTP) proved he had a temper and we know that Petunia had one, although I liked to think that was partly Vernon's fault. Lily has been shown through Snape's pensieve memories to have a temper, but against her own son, that soon, might be a bit of a stretch. I can see the fine line of a mother's jealousy over a girl about to replace his mother, so I say, well written and spot on.

Tammy Driver posted a comment on Friday 2nd July 2010 2:29am for Trouble Brews at Hogwarts

Are you going to continue this story? It's to good to just leave it unfinished.

noylj posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 6:26pm for Trouble Brews at Hogwarts

I guess that your Lily and James, like Sirius, never got a chance to grow up from their 18-year-old selves
Oh well, someday Lils will come to her senses and see the bitch that is she.
I can't see Herms letting this continue, unless she is still starry-eyed over all the marvelous professors and authority figures in her perfect little world.

twinheart posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2008 2:02pm for Trouble Brews at Hogwarts

Brilliant! So glad you took this over. Great tension and complexity. Looking forward to more.

Skullhunter posted a comment on Monday 5th May 2008 5:35pm for Trouble Brews at Hogwarts

Like the story, has a nice twist to it with his parents still alive. I was wondering if you're still working on it or if you've abandoned it.

falenas108 posted a comment on Monday 5th May 2008 7:17am for Trouble Brews at Hogwarts

Great chapter, but slight continuity error. According to OOTP, McGonagall was teaching for 39 years (page 321), so it would have been impossible for her to have been a first year when Snape was in his seventh year.

jessellen posted a comment on Monday 14th April 2008 5:21pm for Trouble Brews at Hogwarts

What to say? An excellent fic, one that I cannot wait to read more of. Not entirely sure about the characterisation of Lily - though on some levels I am inclined to sympathise with her, as it seems that Harry is set to replace the most important woman in his life with Hermione - at least I imagine that's the way Lily sees it. Anywho, as the author I imagine you know what will happen next, so I eagerly await a fresh chapter :)

Prongs1977 posted a comment on Monday 7th April 2008 8:37am for Trouble Brews at Hogwarts

I do hope for another chapter soon, this is wonderfu!

riegert8 posted a comment on Sunday 6th April 2008 12:11pm for Trouble Brews at Hogwarts

I do think that this is a good story, Lily may have her reason for acting the way she is. But you can never take back your words or actions, Lily has hurt Harry with her words and she has also slap him an couple times. For me part of me hope that Harry never forgive her and shut her out of his life, the other half wonder what her excuse would be before really knowing if she deserve a second chance. To me it seem that Lily is a cross between Snape & Dumbledore.

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Saturday 22nd March 2008 3:51am for Trouble Brews at Hogwarts

Awful Lily. I hate it ewhen parents get like that. I can't wait for an update, this story is doing so well.

scribbler posted a comment on Tuesday 18th March 2008 3:42pm for Trouble Brews at Hogwarts

I would dearly love to see this continued. It's a great story and is just crying out for completion. Having this scale of row between Harry and his mother is just too good to ignore. What is James going to say about what has happened? and where will McGonagall come down? I think she'd side with Harry...but that's just my guess. I want to see what you do with it. Does Hermione have to face down Lily? a duel? that would be amazing.

Anyway - please? I want to see the next chapter!!

Regards,

Edmond
a/k/a the_scribbler

spidercrossing53 posted a comment on Tuesday 18th March 2008 1:12pm for Trouble Brews at Hogwarts

This is a great story. Please continue to update it.

Clayton Rickey posted a comment on Saturday 15th March 2008 6:54pm for Trouble Brews at Hogwarts

Damn. This is shaping up to be one hell of a story. I'll try and keep up. Good job by the way. I couldn't tell any real difference between your style and the first author's style.

Aelita posted a comment on Thursday 13th March 2008 1:38pm for Trouble Brews at Hogwarts

CAN YOU PLEASE UPDATE THIS SITE! I mean you have stories here as well as on The Kinsfire Archives! I love you stuff so please keep updating! Thanks!

gerald mchugh posted a comment on Friday 7th March 2008 1:53pm for Trouble Brews at Hogwarts

Great story seamless continuation a fine fic allround

AnnaTigg posted a comment on Thursday 14th February 2008 2:04am for Trouble Brews at Hogwarts

This fanfic is great - well-written and gripping. I know you lovely fanfiction authors hate hearing this, but please please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!

jon891 posted a comment on Thursday 31st January 2008 6:27pm for Trouble Brews at Hogwarts

Please try to update soon.