Justin posted a comment on Monday 19th March 2007 8:17am

i liked it.

Sonicdale posted a comment on Monday 19th March 2007 8:15am

Very interesting.
Liked the "soul DOSEN'T die" angle.
But, you being you, you had to make the afterlife a big orgy :)

Heh.

Liked that Ginny became the new minister and the sleveless robes thing. Nice bit.

Good work.

merf425 posted a comment on Monday 19th March 2007 8:04am

I liked this story! I normally avoid most Azkaban!Harry stories because of all the "ZOMG I am innocent and in Azkaban! WOE!!one!" that a lot of writers overdo, but oneshots like this are tolerable and, in this specific case, very enjoyable. :)

redjacobson posted a comment on Monday 19th March 2007 7:50am

the thing i liked the best out of this one-shot is that both Ron and Ginny believed in Harry; and; especially; that Ron avoided being a prat *GRIN*

red

Kaerion posted a comment on Monday 19th March 2007 7:45am

No complaints on the quality here! It might not be your best work ever, but it's absolutely up to your usual standards.

Harry's actions do feel a *little* too much like "taking the easy way out", but after all the crap he's been through in canon, plus this betrayal, I'm pretty sure I would've done the same thing, so it would be hypocritical to complain.

The thing that, IMHO, pushes this up among the best Azkaban!Harry stories I've read, even considering how short it is, is how you have Harry point out so many of their obvious faults and mistakes that are almost never pointed out, even in fics like this. Or when they are pointed out, it's usually with nowhere near the elegance that you pull off, but your way with words (dialogue, in particular) is one of your biggest strengths as an author.

I especially liked seeing how Dumbledore's unfailing trust of Snape came back to bite him on the ass, as Snape's actions in the fic are totally compatible with canon!Snape; An abusive asshole that would do almost anything to hurt Harry, and, I believe, is loyal to himself foremost, and whoever can benefit him the most, at the time, second.

Federico Buelna posted a comment on Monday 19th March 2007 7:21am

My god, that's a great story, once again Kinsfire, you prove that you've got such an incredible skill when it comes to writing, in your own unique style, that sometimes get's a little tiring, but it's great all the same.
I hope to read something else from you soon.

Jamie46 posted a comment on Monday 19th March 2007 7:15am

awwwwwwwwwwwww. Sad, but amusing, but fun, but true. :) I liked it, all the way through. It's always sad when Harry dies in these stories, but like in this one, sometimes it's needed. I like how Ginny became Minister and changed the dress code. ;) hehehe, that was cute. And yay for Ron getting the Cannons renamed after him. :) And I *really* like that the souls weren't destroyed. :) That was great.

Overall, an excellent little one-shot and I'm very happy that you wrote it. Thanks for sharing!

vertru posted a comment on Monday 19th March 2007 6:56am

Well my friend, I'd say you had a warped sensed of humour, but then you'd probably say something back about pot and kettle territory. Suffice it to say you have once more turned out an amusing, yet poignant story of love lost and regained, of the continuing stupidity of the sheeple populating the world (and not just the wizarding one), and of the way things should wind up. I can see why this one wouldn't leave you alone. An interesting conceptual extrapolation to sat the least. Good job, Kins, good one indeed. Vern

jilumasam posted a comment on Monday 19th March 2007 6:49am

Nice! An excellent story...

Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Monday 19th March 2007 6:15am

It was an interesting, if bittersweet story, thank you.