bajab posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd August 2007 1:19am

WellI had a good laugh with it. Some people just don't have a sense of humor, do they?

seeker77 posted a comment on Monday 20th August 2007 8:50am

Alot racy but hey they are teenagers at a boarding school right? I like your writing, (waiting for an update to wishful thinking) keep it going

rune1806 posted a comment on Sunday 12th August 2007 3:47pm

why did they not like this it is a cute funny story. well done

Hoss posted a comment on Monday 6th August 2007 1:57pm

Great way to kill Volde but a bad way to die. Good fun thanks.

KEFIOX posted a comment on Saturday 4th August 2007 12:43pm

I absolutely loved it! At the same time it was short and sweet, but also rich with detail, and very well written. I can't believe anyone could disagree.

saints_dude123 posted a comment on Monday 23rd July 2007 2:03pm

loved it

WeaslyObsessed posted a comment on Friday 13th July 2007 4:44pm

i loved it! so original and yet still very much like the book. though i didnt much like some of the phrases you used. 9/10

deadpool12 posted a comment on Saturday 7th July 2007 4:39pm

good one liked it alot

Mrs.TiffanyPotter posted a comment on Friday 22nd June 2007 3:52pm

OMG! I loved it. totally great. Trust Harry to kill voldy by accident.

IamNotawriter posted a comment on Tuesday 19th June 2007 5:20pm

Don't know why the judges had a problem with it. It reads well and progresses naturally without being forced or strained. The only potential flaw, that I noted, was the foreshadowing of Snape's abrupt departure made the ending a reasonably predictable outcome.

Muggleborn Prince posted a comment on Wednesday 13th June 2007 11:42am

I like this story

<h1> YES good story. </h2>

GryffindorDragon posted a comment on Tuesday 5th June 2007 5:07am

A bit sappy. Delightfully silly. One of the best 'love is the power-he-knows-not' stories I've read. Great job.

kb0 posted a comment on Sunday 13th May 2007 5:59am

OK, parts of that were, uh, a bit gratuitous, but all in all, I didn't think it wasthat bad. The funny thing to me was, I had the thought while they were still in the locker room, "Hmm, I wonder if I could write a story where H/G make love and that kills Voldie" and then you went ahead and do just that. Ha! Oh well, yet another fun idea already taken. :-)

I do have 1 critique, I can't figure out why Harry had such an overwhelming urge to confess what he did, practically demanding detention. That seems somewhat out of character, especially in this story.

Anyway, thanks for sharing.

Jevandodo posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd May 2007 4:25am

Excellent ending I love it. And Snape was excellent to. Love how you killed Mouldy Voldie.
JD

gadriam posted a comment on Tuesday 1st May 2007 1:42am

Ok. Either you violated a bunch of rules or something, or my conclusion is that you attracted a swarm of rampaging assholes.
This piece is really cute, and while it's not the first fuxorcism i've read, it's up there with the best. OOC of course, since JK didn't write any genitals, but these tasty layers of hormones and emotions makes me care squat about that. HappySnape as icing on the cake, and a whole bunch of great oneliners makes this little pastry a feelgood bookmark to come back to.
All in all, i like your style.
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Kinsfire replied:

Any rules were unwritten. It was one of those LJ ficfests where they give a short description, and you go from there. Mine was "Harry gets hit on the head in Quidditch and goes into the wrong shower room."

I didn't follow their unwritten rules of how Harry and Ginny MUST be written.

Yet another thing that tended to drive me away from the H/G crowd.

juju jula posted a comment on Sunday 29th April 2007 10:54pm

Great Idea to kill him like that.

I also like the way you use humor without it getting too silly.

Scott M posted a comment on Friday 20th April 2007 8:21am

Ha! Imploding Voldemort...good fun!

Sheepstamper posted a comment on Friday 6th April 2007 4:56am

loved it. (figuratively speaking of course )

moonstonemystyk posted a comment on Wednesday 4th April 2007 9:27am

I thought that it was adorable.

spritestar posted a comment on Sunday 11th March 2007 3:57pm

I have no understanding of why people would rip this story up. Its funny, well thought out and too damn short to be anything other then a PWP. (even though there is that little plot lurking in the locker above Harry as he passed out) Thanks