Jack B Nimble posted a comment on Sunday 11th December 2005 9:47am

Fun bit, but I have to agree it is more fluff than pwp. On the other hand, fluff certainly has its place. :)

I do wonder how much you could really continue this, tho. On the other hand, I would very much like to see a sequel with reactions from the Weasleys and others.

Nicely done!

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Sunday 11th December 2005 9:47am

*chuckle* I loved it the first time I read it in your LJ and I love it now. A delightful one-shot.

Amamama posted a comment on Sunday 11th December 2005 8:58am

Great, wonderful, sexy and inspiring. And the best damned way to conquer Voldemort I've ever read in any fic. Loved it!

Berte

Terry Chang posted a comment on Sunday 11th December 2005 6:42am

...snape...that killed.

Bill Hagridsson posted a comment on Sunday 11th December 2005 5:58am

I can't imagine what anybody complained about with this story. I happen to think it's very well written and a lot of fun to read. True, PWP can be fun to read at times, but I much prefer a story like this one. It seems more believable to me.

Tommy posted a comment on Sunday 11th December 2005 4:30am

Lol...
I certainly 'enjoyed' that one... :P - keep up the good work! ;)

Tommy
aka
Shadow10@start.no

Terry Swain posted a comment on Sunday 11th December 2005 3:53am

great story. :)

Inimene posted a comment on Sunday 11th December 2005 3:43am

Well..... ummm this is an interesting story corny beginning and a nice twist at the end. While you used love to destroy Voldemort I just or maybehope that Rowling wont you just found the anwser to the end of the HP series.

Hagrid posted a comment on Sunday 11th December 2005 3:22am

Truely beyond the magic we do here. And you say people didn't like this? Why in heavans name would they not like this? Erotic, funny, fast paced...oh, no wonder it was not taken well. Well, what can yer expect when yer let muggle read yer stories?

Inibrius posted a comment on Sunday 11th December 2005 2:43am

Freaking hilarious. Good show!

Steven2 posted a comment on Sunday 11th December 2005 2:18am

batty nutty, somewhat unique. i have only read one other story that harry doing any type of intimate activity that would inflict Voldie-shorts with pain. I may want to add that angle to my fanfiction that I am doing.

castaldok posted a comment on Sunday 11th December 2005 12:25am

hee, hee, U'm having to hold my laughter, I found the end of this very funny, It was perfectly written.

slinky_jinx posted a comment on Saturday 10th December 2005 11:41pm

I loved it

Adam posted a comment on Saturday 10th December 2005 10:45pm

This was a lot of fun to read, and I can see no reason why you would have had resoundingly negative responses to it.

Machiavelli Jr posted a comment on Saturday 10th December 2005 10:40pm

Well, I always thought it was 'Plot? What plot?' but anyways I'm very glad there was one. There's plenty of smut out there, but not much with such a very entertaining point to it. You see how much fun you have when Harry isn't being a Noble Git, or stressed, or dealing with impossible ethical conundra...
I loved it, and it's probably the funniest thing you've ever written. Snape alone gets you the full 10/10.

Tarkas posted a comment on Saturday 10th December 2005 9:57pm

I have no idea why this received the "overwhelmingly negative response" you describe; it's excellent, IMO. I can agree that one or two aspects of the very last scene -- the "Ding-Dong" bit, for instance -- don't quite match the rest of the story perfectly, but they don't rob the rest of the tale of its charm, and I've seen far worse examples of the love-Moldy-to-death idea.

So I like it, and the detracters can go stand under the Knight Bus for all I care. ;-) This is good, better than many a ficafest storu, and I wish you'd do more in the same vein.

crs_seq posted a comment on Saturday 10th December 2005 8:23pm

Sweet

Jamey posted a comment on Saturday 10th December 2005 5:42pm

I really have to wonder *WHY* you would get negative comments on this story! And I'm glad you've posted it - I'd like to see the rest of them from kinsfire.com posted here. Especially "It Started One Summer" - I'd kinda like to see that one finished at some point.

For that matter, who came up with PWP being Porn Without Plot??? It should be PWOP, because PWP should be Porn *WITH* Plot - something seldom seen except when Anne Rice is writing under a pseudonym.

Somehow, though, I don't think you *COULD* write porn without plot.

rachhess99 posted a comment on Saturday 10th December 2005 5:35pm

If you were aiming for a story with a great plot line, well then maybe you missed your mark. If you were just going for fluff/smut/fun... I liked it. It had me smiling when I finished it, and I could see the scene in my head, which is always a testament to a good writer. Well done, I say!

jmblack posted a comment on Saturday 10th December 2005 4:51pm

Loved it! I thought the development early on was great, and the later parts had me ROTLFLMAO. Obviously not much room for a sequal, though I would love to see the scene where the specifics of Riddle's defeat is explained to both the Order, and the Weasley's. And Sirious would have been SO PROUD!