Alex00 posted a comment on Monday 30th January 2006 5:42pm for Chapter 5

great chapter please update soon

Patches posted a comment on Sunday 8th January 2006 10:27pm for Chapter 5

Is Harry ever going to feel worthy? I hope this gets better soon. It is really sad now! I see by your notes that things will improve after you meet the "challenge"! Please keep writing!

The Resident posted a comment on Tuesday 15th November 2005 10:21am for Chapter 5

Well, Harry is in need of grief counseling, anger management, and human relations training; Lily is in need of anger management. Hermione and Tonks, I don't know. Fun to be had by all. Damn I hope it all gets straightened out.

Manatheron posted a comment on Wednesday 19th October 2005 6:16pm for Chapter 5

O.O


Wow, you guys are all just awesome! I can't wait for the next update. Incidently, what was the challenge?

coolone007 posted a comment on Saturday 8th October 2005 5:25am for Chapter 5

Please Tell me you are gogin to continue with this fic. You can't leave people waiting like this.

The Resident posted a comment on Friday 30th September 2005 2:59am for Chapter 5

Please write more of this story soon. The Lily statue is a new twist and I like the way you are handling things so far. Keep up the good work.

The Unicorn posted a comment on Friday 30th September 2005 1:02am for Chapter 5

Nice story, it would probably have seemed much nicer if I hadn't read "Sorceror's Apprentice" first as you used entire identical paragraphs in both stories. The one nitpick in this story is that Harry is too self aware about how he was abused when discussing Dumbeldore and the Dursleys.

Adam posted a comment on Monday 26th September 2005 11:40pm for Chapter 5

another fun story, hope you continue it soon.

Robbie Byrd posted a comment on Thursday 8th September 2005 5:46am for Chapter 5

I enjoyed how you had Harry take control of his life. And how he told Snape off also.

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Thursday 1st September 2005 3:18am for Chapter 5

Concerning the statue itself: this is a *magical statue* (a golem, if you will) designed on a living template (the pre-nuptials Lily Evans). The process was similar (but not identical) to that used for wizard portraits, and apparently the sculptor (according to the statue) took the process to his grave. The spells and charms on the statue are such that unless the person knows the statue *is* a statue, he/she won't be able to tell (neither James or Remus *could* tell the statue apart from the real Lily, even when she was present, and even though *Harry* knows that this Lily is a statue, his body says otherwise) unless the statue *herself* wishes to reveal her construction (it is entirely due to these known facts that, in all honesty I have to refer to the statue as *her* as opposed to *it* because, unlike a typical golem, the statue has its own personality, and a completely separate personality from the original, even though it was crafted by Obliviation/Memory Charms).

Lily *does* state that, for some reason, Severus *is* aware of some facets of her existence (and I suspect it has something to do with Narcissa Black). Why would I have this suspiscion? Firstly, both Severus and Narcissa were Slytherins together, and therefore, because Lily, more than once, tried to protect Severus, Severus himself may have known about Lily/Narcissa. Also, was Severus, back in their Hogwarts days, *envious* of Lily for successfully bedding Narcissa? That is not as far-fetched as it sounds: consider that Lily and Narcissa were the two ladies atop the Ten Sexiest Girls Of Hogwarts at the time, and even Severus is not proof against a pretty woman, and Narcissa, back then, was certainly that (not that she isn't today); also, everything points to the Lucius/Narcissa marriage being an *arranged* marriage (especially considering *known* Family Black Tradition, and why Andromeda got booted out of the family), so there are yet more skeletons in the Black closet (how did Narcissa get trapped into her marriage to Lucius, for one). Also, is there something that even Lily is unaware of concerning Bellatrix? (Lily herself suggested that Harry fetch Narcissa because of what she is aware of; however, what *else* does Narcissa know that even Lily is unaware of? Right now, Narcissa, not Lily, is the second-greatest living authority on Bellatrix Black-Lestrange, as her sister, and far too many things are unexplainable concerning her. Because Bellatrix is, for now, on Tom's side, Harry needs answers.)

Prince Charon posted a comment on Saturday 20th August 2005 12:11am for Chapter 5

Very good, very interesting.

I look forward to seeing more of this.

Soon, please.

gryffindors posted a comment on Sunday 7th August 2005 11:23am for Chapter 5

hello, is this fic about to be updated?
i enjoyed the new idea about sculbture lily

dave gerecke posted a comment on Thursday 4th August 2005 11:15am for Chapter 5

What a ripper of a story.
Please keep going
dave

David Thacker posted a comment on Saturday 30th July 2005 1:19am for Chapter 5

This is great.Have you read any of the books by David Eddings?The by Torak thing is why I asked.Keep up the great work.

Raul Sanchez posted a comment on Friday 22nd July 2005 6:38am for Chapter 5

all these stories are excellent. I especially like : The Sorcerers Apprentice, Like a Phoenix and My Fathers image. Basically althe Harrry/Multi. Keep up the good work adn I'll keep reading them.

Rocky235 posted a comment on Sunday 17th July 2005 12:12pm for Chapter 5

No! No! Lily and Hermione are wrong. Harry needs them all up in the bed, right away.

Anonymous Reviewer posted a comment on Thursday 14th July 2005 1:13pm for Chapter 5

EXtraordinary - I have just read the 1st 5 chapters in one sitting - and am in an agony of frustration that it will be another 3 months before the next installment arrives - You are one of the finest story tellers currently writing in any medium, and I hope Ed Mcmahon visits you with an enormous check, so that you can do this full time for the next hundred years.

Thanks
Ken Warner

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Thursday 14th July 2005 11:39am for Chapter 5

In a word, *ouch*. I recognize part of one chapter from another of your stories (Sorcerer's Apprentice); however, the pairing in this story is *decidedly unusual* (Harry/Lily Evans/Tonks/Hermione). Worse, I even understand why Severus would call Lily a *whore*; Severus is very much a *one woman man* of the Old Anglican School (except for the fact that he's a wizard, he would fit right in amongst the Puritans that came to what is now Massachusetts in the seventeenth century); the fact that she was one of Narcissa's lovers (yes, I said *one* of them; from a comment Lily's Statue made, Narcissa did NOT draw the line at incest) merely exacerbated the issue, whether or not that Severus had a crush on Lily (or Narcissa, or even both) certainly wouldn't have HELPED! Severus Snape reminds me rather horribly or Reverend Dimmesdale from *The Scarlet Letter*, and we certainly know what happened to HIM...

red jacobson posted a comment on Wednesday 13th July 2005 11:00pm for Chapter 5

very interesting; I'll admit; I'm always a sucker for Harry gets a Harem stories; and; this one should be a goodie! I'm wondering one thing, with Lil being made of marble; even if she is 'fully functional' does she have the skin warmth, softness etc? otherwise, I can't imagine it would be an overly comfortable experience *GRIN*

red

Anon posted a comment on Wednesday 13th July 2005 6:48pm for Chapter 5

Well how erotic is this? I love it. i love the kinky older woman thing with tonks, the mother thats not his mother with the statue and then the normal love concept with hermoine. real kinky