jonnyb posted a comment on Sunday 20th August 2006 4:14am

Oh dear me... that was a bit cheesy. Particularly the last line. Well written though, well done.

Alexis posted a comment on Sunday 20th August 2006 4:10am

I loved this one when I first read it and I think it is still very cute. Great job!

Babs posted a comment on Sunday 20th August 2006 3:58am

You kept me guessing until the middle of the story.

Prince Charon posted a comment on Sunday 20th August 2006 12:42am

Sweet. I like this, more than words can express.

Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Sunday 20th August 2006 12:30am

That was nice. Can't say I was surprised at who it was after the beast told Hermione that it might not be Harry under the silver stag.

Thanks for writing and posting this.

Tom A.

Deborahsu posted a comment on Saturday 19th August 2006 11:59pm

Predictable, but well written and a cute story. Not that I can imagine Harry using such formal language! LOL!

Alcatras posted a comment on Saturday 19th August 2006 11:49pm

A good piece of writeing bot the the stak mask thing is a bit predictable.

Ken Warner posted a comment on Saturday 19th August 2006 11:27pm

I loved this the first 3 times I read it on your old site - thanks for bringing it to a wider audience.
pretty much anything you want to share with us will be cherished
thanks

mac_gin posted a comment on Saturday 19th August 2006 11:21pm

Not bad for a fluffy one-shot, got to admit that I thought the Beast could have been Draco. Says in a couple of pages what some others waste 10 or more on.

Agree with a previous review, any other gems hidden away?

justme posted a comment on Saturday 19th August 2006 10:48pm

'Not bad... Not bad at all.'

Lira posted a comment on Saturday 19th August 2006 9:02pm

OOOOOH! Absolutely love it! Brilliant story! Have you hidden any more such gems from us? ;)

dave gerecke posted a comment on Saturday 19th August 2006 8:07pm

Not bad, had me guessing for a bit.
dave

Adam posted a comment on Saturday 19th August 2006 6:41pm

now this was fun :) assumptions can always lead to entertainment.

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 19th August 2006 5:51pm

What an excellent story. I love happy endings and this was a really good one! What a wonderful situation and conclusion. Thanks for an uplifting story. pms

AK posted a comment on Saturday 19th August 2006 5:27pm

The speach is a bit formal, but hey why not. Also knowing the Dursley's I bet Harry never saw the beauty and the beast.

RedKnight posted a comment on Saturday 19th August 2006 5:26pm

Entertaining, although I must agree with a previous review that having someone such as Goyle, or someone equally as repulsive under the mask would've made for a good come upance to Cho.

Mickey posted a comment on Saturday 19th August 2006 5:19pm

Very nice, although if it wasntended to be a surprise for the readers that he was HP you shouldn't have been so blatent.

The Unicorn

Drake posted a comment on Saturday 19th August 2006 4:46pm

Very nice. :] kind of reminds me of Arthur Miller's works. Although, a Goyle would have been a more suitable match to the narcissist Miss (if that) Chang.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Saturday 19th August 2006 4:27pm

I've enjoyed this one from the first time I read it. 'Tis a delightful short that I shall take instruction from in the art of constructing same.

Nick5 posted a comment on Saturday 19th August 2006 4:13pm

Cute.