mashimaromadness posted a comment on Tuesday 1st January 2008 9:04pm for Visit to the Potter Family Graveyard

Ummm... wow. If not for the title that would have been a complete shocker. As it stands, I want to see the circumstances of such a strange occurance.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd January 2007 11:15am for Visit to the Potter Family Graveyard

Very interesting start.

gunny

sasuke83 posted a comment on Wednesday 17th May 2006 6:28am for Visit to the Potter Family Graveyard

Intriguing. I would very much like to see how the story progresses. Hmmm

M. R. Moore posted a comment on Saturday 13th May 2006 2:25pm for Visit to the Potter Family Graveyard

'and everyone ran out screaming.'

The End

I could just see that...

oh, must continue reading.

Rocky235 posted a comment on Sunday 30th April 2006 6:11am for Visit to the Potter Family Graveyard

"What happens now? Is it really Lily Evans Potter?"

What happens now? If it was me I know I'd have to pee. Ha

I like it, as all your work.

japanese_jew posted a comment on Saturday 29th April 2006 9:57am for Visit to the Potter Family Graveyard

drr, no, the first reaction is "james?"

kellygreenpassion posted a comment on Monday 24th April 2006 9:49am for Visit to the Potter Family Graveyard

when you wrote this did you first look at a horror movie?
I like it through

Matt15 posted a comment on Friday 14th April 2006 5:13pm for Visit to the Potter Family Graveyard

This is an odd pairing, that many people would object to. I however, will not. This seems to be a good start, and I do hope you plan to update soon.

Mariposa posted a comment on Wednesday 29th March 2006 9:46am for Visit to the Potter Family Graveyard

This was a really great start for a story that's just always going to be on the back burner. *sigh* I wish there was more, even if it could be a little squicky, you got me interested.

jake m posted a comment on Friday 24th March 2006 9:58am for Visit to the Potter Family Graveyard

are u going to continue?

David Gilles posted a comment on Thursday 16th March 2006 12:00pm for Visit to the Potter Family Graveyard

This is quite interesting so far. I am wondering where you plan on taking this story, since this first chapter is so vague. I hope to see more chapters soon in the future. You are one of the few authors whose fics I like to re-read.

Bobboky posted a comment on Monday 6th March 2006 3:13am for Visit to the Potter Family Graveyard

cool

Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Monday 27th February 2006 5:29am for Visit to the Potter Family Graveyard

Hmmm, imagination grabbing. Sucker us into a story, and tell us that you'll be updating very rarely. Evil!

Good start. Good luck with the Ties of Blood problem. I'm having similar problems with my fiction, which is causing me to write snippets of other stories.

So it goes.

Thanks for writing. Good luck with both stories.

Tom A.

Kinsfire replied:

What can I say? I'm Evil(tm)!

It was started from a challenge, and it'll update whenever the mood strikes me. The real problem I'm having with ToB is that things want to happen too fast, although I think I've just worked that one out - finally. With any luck, if I'm right, I should be able to update by the weekend - but that's not a definite.

James7 posted a comment on Monday 20th February 2006 6:53am for Visit to the Potter Family Graveyard

Just a thought... at the end, Lilly didn't know about time passing, so she would probably think that the person she saw was James Potter, wouldn't she??

jarno837 posted a comment on Thursday 16th February 2006 9:05pm for Visit to the Potter Family Graveyard

continu soon ant dosex with harry lilly

Manatheron posted a comment on Monday 13th February 2006 8:44am for Visit to the Potter Family Graveyard

Hmmm.. my money goes to the fact that Harry had somehow re-connected the soul that has been gaurding him.

atlantis-rob posted a comment on Saturday 11th February 2006 12:06pm for Visit to the Potter Family Graveyard

D00d! Like everyone else I've gotta go with the ADD beat-down on this on ya. This is too cool a start ot just leave us hanging with! Agh. Seems like a cool idea so far, and I can't wait to see where you take it, whenever you take it. Cheers!

Steven Augart posted a comment on Thursday 9th February 2006 5:13am for Visit to the Potter Family Graveyard

Oh my goodness, that is indeed intriguing.

The fact that you say it has "Lily/Harry", though, implies that either she's not really his mom or it's some sort of surreal incest universe that may well squick me into dropping the story when it comes up. But I did enjoy this chapter.

Valerie posted a comment on Wednesday 8th February 2006 7:42am for Visit to the Potter Family Graveyard

Wow...that was great...look what you did. Now i'm all interested...i hope you update this more than you said you would. It really is great.

Bobmin356 posted a comment on Tuesday 7th February 2006 8:41am for Visit to the Potter Family Graveyard

OK, it's nice to see something to read from you. :)

Two initial comments.

1) Lily waking up, wouldn't she think Harry is James initially? Afterall, she's never seen a grown up Harry. To her, Harry is just a baby.

2) PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE do not make this into some sort of incest fest. There is plenty of angst to be had with a live Lily without turning this into Harry/Lily love affair. Give him a contempory girlfriend, not his mother.

Kinsfire replied:

To be honest with you, and whomever else reads this reply, I have no idea where this story will go. It's honestly meant as something to write when I can't write in a given story I'm hacking away at. (I spent something like a week getting two pages in Ties of Blood - this was written because I needed to be writing SOMETHING.)

I can't promise that it won't go incestuous, but I also won't say that it will. It'll happen as it happens. I really have no idea where this story is going.

Besides, Lily's only about four years older than him - she's been dead for tax purposes. *grin*