Tumshie posted a comment on Saturday 29th April 2006 10:04am for Proofs and Information Gathering

Thank you Keith, the first new fanfic I've had the privilege to read today. Well done again another well thought out plot

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Saturday 29th April 2006 9:53am for Proofs and Information Gathering

Talk about a rip-roarng return! Lily is indeed *bound* to Harry (magically), which certainly changes the rules. Lily also (with considerable help from everyone) tears Dumbledore a new one (to the point that Albus offers to resign as Headmaster, and still may). Lily has reason, apparently, *not* to like Severus Snape, given her comment to the group *before* hearing of Harry's life after her own death. Finding out that Lily was an Unspeakable is far from surprising (as Lily was a known Charms Mistress). Apparently, once her bonafides are proven to the Ministry's satisfaction, Lily and Harry will remain either at Godric's Hollow (which they own, remember?) or even at #12 (which will fall to, most likely, Harry, if Sirius is well and truly gone). There *are* several confrontations I am waiting to see (with some measure of glee, I have to admit):
Lily vs. the Dursleys (a live Lily will severely shake *both* of them up, I guarantee!)
Lily vs. Fudge
Lily vs. Umbridge
Lily vs. Severus Snape

But what the heck did *Harry* see at the Death Chamber that got him to take command so *ruthlessly*? For some reason, he saw the folks there as Death Eaters (considering he led with Reducto, he was definitely taking no chances at all). Most surprising (for Harry) the entire group (including Dumbledore) obeyed *without question*. Who's going to point *that* little tidbit out to Boy Wonder?

Kirk Staley posted a comment on Saturday 29th April 2006 9:43am for Proofs and Information Gathering

Keep working, but give us a bone with cliff-hanger

Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Saturday 29th April 2006 8:17am for Proofs and Information Gathering

Interesting, a lot of revelations in short order. I'm curious to Harry's reactions, Lily obviously expected something like this, but then Harry mentions Death Eaters and blows that thought to hell. A hell of a cliff hanger.

Ron posted a comment on Saturday 29th April 2006 8:11am for Proofs and Information Gathering

Damn! Good chapter, Keith. More on group.