Riven posted a comment on Saturday 6th May 2006 9:55pm for Proofs and Information Gathering

awsome story, a really interesting story line i can honestly say i havent come across yet. i cant wait to actually see some smut though.

Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Thursday 4th May 2006 5:20am for Proofs and Information Gathering

Very interesting developments, and quite the enjoyable chapter, as always. I look forward to whenever you finally get chapter three done and up. Here's to your needing to, as you put it, 'cleanse your palate'!

n4zhg posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd May 2006 8:55am for Proofs and Information Gathering

No, that's "Tommy Atkins" and I have to admit changing the name to Harry would be appropriate.

I was thinking of the viciousness of women given good reason and of this verse:

When you're wounded and left on Afghanistan's plains,
And the women come out to cut up what remains,
Jest roll to your rifle and blow out your brains
An' go to your Gawd like a soldier.

Tommy posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd May 2006 9:25am for Proofs and Information Gathering

I like it, but I also feels that it goes a bit fast forward...

Princess Fictoria posted a comment on Monday 1st May 2006 3:04pm for Proofs and Information Gathering

Absolutely fabulous chapter. I am a bit amazed with how well harry is handling the return of his mother as well as Lily. Though her explanation is plausable I wonder if there will be future emotional reactions once the truth totally sinks in... plus I look forward to Lily's inevitable confrontation with the Dursleys... sister to sister, so to speak. Also, with her back it will be easy to prove Sirius is innocent once he returns from the veil. Please post more soon!

Nanio posted a comment on Monday 1st May 2006 2:34pm for Proofs and Information Gathering

Ok, I didn't quite know what to say last time, but I think I figured it out.

I liked the chapter. You did a nice setup on what Lily did and got the more drastic BS out of the way. The Dumbledore rant, while your classic style, was a bit too over the top in this one. I thought that your choice of occupation for Lily was also a good one. Most people don't usually state her former job.

scott2 posted a comment on Monday 1st May 2006 11:24am for Proofs and Information Gathering

Interesting, has less angst/ emotional harry which is likable, less philosphy as well.

Loved the poem, might look up more of Kipplings work, Keep it up :)

liquidfyre posted a comment on Monday 1st May 2006 10:45am for Proofs and Information Gathering

MORE SOON

OR ELSE

*begins to sharpen his Spork*

nice story so far keep it up and MORE UPDATES HEHE

Manatheron posted a comment on Monday 1st May 2006 4:08am for Proofs and Information Gathering

somthing is... odd... about this fight. ;)

Excellent work, I can't wait to see the next one.

KLGreen posted a comment on Sunday 30th April 2006 11:43pm for Proofs and Information Gathering

me like it very much

Ron posted a comment on Sunday 30th April 2006 7:04pm for Proofs and Information Gathering

Keith, I have to say it again, you are EVIL!!!! That out of the way, I really like the chapter, especially the poem, which I happen to agree with, btw, just like Remus does. This is one I'd really like to see you put into your regular update list. I think I can see where this is going, and I approve, especially if it comes out like this:
{H/L/Hr/G} + {R/L} + N + T + R
I don't think you've ever brought Nev into the Potter family, which is sad, especially since he is one of the few Harry trusts absolutely. In addition, I think it would do his confidence a world of good to be accepted so unconditionally by a loving family.

Richard Robinson posted a comment on Sunday 30th April 2006 2:12pm for Proofs and Information Gathering

My Oh My This is looking very much like a Fun story to read!!!

n4zhg posted a comment on Sunday 30th April 2006 1:18pm for Proofs and Information Gathering

If you're going to Kipple in that vein, you're going to have to use the end of Young British Soldier at some point. You know the verse I mean...

And if you don't:

Complete Works of Kipling

Kinsfire replied:

if you're talking about the one I think you are, then I think I'd be replacing Tommie with Harry throughout the verse...

I've also thought for a while that Hymn to Breaking Strain was a perfect metaphor for Harry.

FairyQilan1 posted a comment on Sunday 30th April 2006 10:16am for Proofs and Information Gathering

Good so far.

maddy143ded posted a comment on Sunday 30th April 2006 8:50am for Proofs and Information Gathering

ooohhh can we hope this one to be a NC17 incest story with Harry/Lily ?
wait a moment i had another brilliant idea,
how about a Harry/Hermione/Lily pairing ????
i mean you have already done a H/Hr/Hr's Mom, pairing in Family Matters, and this one has never been thought of. please do it.....

Crys posted a comment on Sunday 30th April 2006 8:26am for Proofs and Information Gathering

Who said they're DE's? Or is Harry's panic overriding his sense?

Oh, and interesting ending to the scene. I'm going to bet it was the brooch reacting to Harry's spoken words.

Amamama posted a comment on Sunday 30th April 2006 7:14am for Proofs and Information Gathering

Hmmm. Interesting. This ending has me worrying about Harry, he needs some gentle, but firm, guidance to let this fear of DOM go. Poor guy, I do understand where he comes from. And why did those idiots have to "test" Lily that way? Jerks.

Harry's arguing that the house-elves should decide Kreacher's punishment was brilliant. I'm glad Hermione saw his reasoning and agreed.

I hope Harry accepts Hermione's reasoning that he's not to blame for Sirius' death - if he can forgive Dumbledore, he should be able to forgive himself, but that forgiveness is the hardest to get... Believe me, I know.

Thanks for sharing, I'm looking forward to the next "surprise" uppdate!

Rocky235 posted a comment on Sunday 30th April 2006 6:36am for Proofs and Information Gathering

"A bright flash later and they were all in Godrics Hollow."

I swear to Cow, (as in Holy Cow! I have to be careful not to cause any world wide fan fiction story burnings by offending anyone.), that's the first time I've seen Harry say something like that and then it happened. There's always some discussion and then the scene continues as before. It was a wonderful surprise.

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Sunday 30th April 2006 6:33am for Proofs and Information Gathering

I do believe that Harry just apparated *all eight people* back to Godric's Hollow. (And *clean through* TWO sets of Anti-Apparation Wards; not only those of the Ministry Building, but those of the DoM itself.) Number of other wizards or witches capable of that feat: *none*! (And yes, I am including both Voldy *and* Dumbledore.) There is now some *extreme chin-scratching* going on back at the Department of Mysteries. And even with three normally reliable witnesses (Hermione, Remus, and Dumbledore), who would believe that a mere sixteen-year-old wizard with *no* training could punch through the toughest set of Anti-Apparation Wards outside of Hogwarts or Gringott's, let alone carrying seven others?
The words we're looking for are *absolutely flapped*. And naturally, it will start with the aforementioned *Albus Dumbledore*.

The Resident posted a comment on Sunday 30th April 2006 2:57am for Proofs and Information Gathering

As always, an excellently written, fully engrossing chapter. Thank you for providing alternate looks at the HP universe and give me and so many others, hours of enjoyment. Keep up the great work.