PaulD posted a comment on Thursday 15th May 2008 4:41am for Chapter 5

So far, this fic is one of the better ones I have been reading (and I've read a lot of them ... and I still do).

- very good dialogue
- I hate the guilt ridden Harry stories. This isn't one of them
- most persons in this story are NOT caricatures. In most fanfics they are. Even JKR is prone to exaggerate in this way.
- no idiotic superHarry or supreme evil Dumbledore. The characters involved get the room they deserve in this story.
- the story is human, understandable, the characters are evolving. In lots of fics they are at a standstill.

I am not an expert (haven been reading a hell of al lot of books since I was 10 years old and still do (53 years now)), but you might have talent in writing. Why don't you try your own fiction?

Best regards,
Paul

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Monday 24th December 2007 5:51pm for Chapter 5

I like this

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Sunday 25th June 2006 10:10pm for Chapter 5

The harem has clearly formed. I'm a bit doubtful as to whether the girls would really lounge about with practically nothing on but it was a very useful plot device.

Amamama posted a comment on Thursday 20th April 2006 6:40am for Chapter 5

Love is true magic, that must be why they fall in love so fast. Wonder where this ends... will the orgy come sooner or later? At least they respect each other, and that's a great start.

Nathan posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd February 2006 5:03am for Chapter 5

Nice chapter. I wasn't sure where you were going with this story on your other website. I am glad that I found the link here so I can continue reading it. So the Harem is Mione, pansy, susan and luna, I like this idea you have going. Now will Ginny ever come back to add another redhead to the mix or is that too much fire?

c3markh posted a comment on Sunday 31st July 2005 6:09am for Chapter 5

The story is great; but thier is an error when accessing chapters 5, 6, & 7.