DJ Rodriguez posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 3:56pm for Chapter 14

^_^ Damn!! All of the chapters here were awesome, and well-thought out. Harry has four lovely, VERY dedicated wives at his side and litle ones soon to be on the way. He's one lucky guy, and a true phoenix at that. He was down and out, in the ash of hatred, pain, and suffering. Now, he is reborn better and stronger then ever!

I hope to see more kinky action between Harry and his wives, maybe even more spanking of his wives. I wonder how they'll react to Harry swatting their perfect bottoms?

Keep it up!

Manakin posted a comment on Tuesday 9th May 2006 9:54am for Chapter 14

A pleasure to read such a fantastic story as what you have written. You've come a long way from chapter 1 =)
I can't wait to read the next chapter in "Like A phoenix From The Ashes"

Darkangelrinks posted a comment on Thursday 4th May 2006 10:50am for Chapter 14

Thank you GOOODDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!
Ive been waiting for this update for god knows how long please update again soon if yu can

Sue Baldwin posted a comment on Thursday 4th May 2006 10:07am for Chapter 14

Oh my G**!!!! You o WOW I need a cold shower and a kleenex(I laughed so hard I cried)

Alorkin posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd May 2006 1:51pm for Chapter 14

Another great chapter to a wonderful fic. Harry is about to show his Slytherin side, and I really pity the wizarding word when he does.
Tonks' statement: "I think you broke the Weasleys, Harry." Was beautiful! Harry's dismissal of Ron's question shows the contempt he holds for the entire family, although he is still not the type to allow harm to come to those near him without cause(firing Arthur).
Snape would not use the expression 'Mover and Shaker' for two reasons. First, it is an Americanism, and second, it is far too modern a statement for him to even consider it. I'd think he's say something more along the lnes of: "with Albus the initiator" or "with Albus the instigator". It would be more in keeping with his normal speech patterns.
So, Lil' Gin gin finally understands exactly what she has lost by not trusting the man to whom she gave her love. Her reaction to the meddling of Bill and Charlie was although ubnderstandable, stupid and now, she will learn. Blind trust is never the answer. (I tell my eleven year old daughter, "QUESTION EVERYTHING!!!")
OK! train sex! Yes! Four for four! Poor ol' Harrykins is gonna be SOOOOORRRRE tomorrow!
OH YEAH! Harry fired them all! The board of Guvners be no more! More,than that, they have all been thoroughly SPANKED! Harry's mentioning of ol' Lucy's hobby was only to be expected, although i really liked his implication of weak mindedness,(the force can have a strong influence...)but I was rather surprised by his chastizement of Agusta Longbottom. I realize Neville supported it, and even helped to initiate it, but I never thought Harry, of all people would show her that kind of disrespect. Yes, it was well deserved, but it was disrespect, nonetheless. rather OOC for him. Understandable, but there.
I hope you don't mind, but I used the name Lorelei as well, (Luna and Ron's newborn daughter.) in my not-yet finished Harry in Azkaben fic. (If my Marine pal can fix my comp and recover the data, that is. If not, I have to try to re-do almost 100,000 words on that story, plus another 7.5 Mbyts worth of other stories.)
As always, I look forward to reading the next installment of 'Like a Phoenix'. Alorkin

Mayjest posted a comment on Sunday 30th April 2006 6:05pm for Chapter 14

This story actually surprised me. I tried to read it ages ago, but when Ginny trusted her brothers over the man she 'supposedly' trusted with her life I stopped, as I pretty much refused to believe that someone who truely loves someone else would act before hearing their side of the story. Then I realised that that was the whole point. Maybe it's possible to have a flashback from Ginny's POV, the aftermath of when she found out Bill and Charlie lied? I'd assume that the brothers, at the very least, got bat-bogeyed. Should have ended up in St. Mungos.

I still don't understand exactly what Bill and Charlie thought they were doing. How exactly would breaking their sister's heart make her happy? How would fecking up the 'Chosen One' be a good thing? Ah well.

Where you went from there, though, I like. I still think that your Harry is a bit out of character (while his upbringing means that he should have that lack of confidence in himself or no knowledge of love, the fact remains that in canon he wasn't that badly affected by the Dursleys) it makes slightly more sense here than in some other stories. Behing rejected by the woman you love without a chance to explain or even deny the lies is likely to make anyone self depreciating. You seem to have a good plot outlined (I especially like what you did with the board of governors), and anticipate the next chapter.

FairyQilan1 posted a comment on Friday 28th April 2006 9:17am for Chapter 14

Bwahahahaha! Sucks to be them.

siaru posted a comment on Friday 28th April 2006 7:35am for Chapter 14

Well, with the BoG shut down, Dumbles is left with no one to rein him in... except Harry and Susan, both nominally students. Or is Amelia to be a Board-of-One?

With only a few chaps to go, I doubt you'd want to chase this rabbit anyway, but... Considering that Voldemort preferentially and specifically used Harry's blood in his resurrection so as to obtain the protection of Harry's mother... did he not magically divorce his birth-mother, Merope Gaunt, then? Is he still the Heir to Slytherin, or is he one step closer to Muggleborn himself now? Something to investigate. Would he lose Pureblood backing if it came out?

kellygreenpassion posted a comment on Wednesday 26th April 2006 11:32pm for Chapter 14

I wanted to know in chapter you said at the end that you were giong to show the Weasley christmas and how they reacted to the news. Are you still planning to do that at all

Life's a Dance posted a comment on Tuesday 25th April 2006 1:31pm for Chapter 14

Please update soon! I've read and enjoyed all of your stories and I look forward to the new chapter!

Victor1 posted a comment on Tuesday 25th April 2006 7:36am for Chapter 14

woohoo

i've been waiting for an update

yeah! that was great!

i can't wait for the next installment!

battlechild posted a comment on Monday 24th April 2006 1:38pm for Chapter 14

I really would have loved to have been in the room with the Board of Governors when Haryy and Susan sent them packing. What a wonderful image.

Excellent!

Muirnin Cocan posted a comment on Monday 24th April 2006 11:47am for Chapter 14

*Gigglefit*

That was fun... what ride do we get to go on next uncle Keith?

something erotic???

I like broomsticks...

Damn computers... I have to start rewriting everything... so I can get my stuff looking and sounding much better than it had in the past... now that my computer is working again... just wish I could be here on FFA... *big ol' pout*

*wink*

As Always,
Muirnin - who is trying to get her kids ready for bed... right now...

Patches posted a comment on Monday 24th April 2006 3:48am for Chapter 14

I really like this chapter. Quite an interesting trip to Hogwarts on the express. I imagine a lot of people couldn't believe their ears. I love the way Harry dealt with the board of govenors. That will not make Moldyshorts happy with Lucy I'm sure. Thanks for writing. I am looking forward to how Harry deals with Moldyshorts and how you wrap this one up. pms

fanfic posted a comment on Monday 24th April 2006 3:08am for Chapter 14

Just a question about Pansy and Hermione, they both missed out on a love making session with Harry before the wedding, are we going to see a one on one with Harry like Luna and Susan received? I would think that would only be fair.

Jeconais posted a comment on Monday 24th April 2006 12:27am for Chapter 14

Signed in test review

Ginny Luvr posted a comment on Saturday 22nd April 2006 2:48pm for Chapter 14

Wow
Excellent fic. There is so much out there that is not very good. You have done an excellent job in your character developement and story line. I greatly look foraward to your next update.

EricThorsen posted a comment on Saturday 22nd April 2006 1:09pm for Chapter 14

Nicely done so far... keep up the good work.

red jacobson1 posted a comment on Saturday 22nd April 2006 10:20am for Chapter 14

hey Keith; a quick question; why was Lucius there? Did I miss a chapter where he was released from Azkaban?

Red

BJH posted a comment on Saturday 22nd April 2006 1:20am for Chapter 14

You know, something has been niggling at the back of my brain about this chapter. About the scene with the Weasleys to be exact. How Harry and all four girls were still in the kitchen as the Weasleys began what I thought should be a rather private discussion and yet none of them noticed the other people in the room? Was this an honest conversation on their part or just a set up to try to convince Harry that they are repentent and should be forgiven?

Then there are the comments made by Ginny herself. Ron's only notable comment was a quick flash of inspiration on a good excuse that they might use to get Harry to overlook their collective vileness. This is to be expected, but Ginny's perspective? I would have thought that, if she were truly repentent, her main thoughts would be of the harm that she caused Harry and how she could find some way to make up for that. Instead her first comment was her acknowledging what SHE had lost. How SHE was paying the price for her lack of faith, stupidity, and vindictiveness. Not about how she had hurt the man she supposedly loved but what she had lost. She seemed resignedly jealous of what the other girls have rather than grateful to them for being there to heal Harry of the damage that she had so cruelly caused. Is this an indication that she is still just the selfish little girl she has been acting as? Is she just trying to get back what she so callously tossed aside or is she truly a changed person who has learned from her mistakes?

Only time and updates will tell me.

BJH