JaceBralor posted a comment on Thursday 16th July 2015 2:37pm for Chapter 4

Nice reference to the works of Spider Robinson this chapter.

abrm posted a comment on Wednesday 8th June 2011 9:15pm for Chapter 4

dude...rape? seriously.... an11 year old incestuous kid...

Lepple posted a comment on Friday 14th January 2011 1:18pm for Chapter 4

The rape shit is just stupid.
Though whats far worse is the idea that Harry would go talk to Dumbledore about it.

TheSandyToadfish posted a comment on Wednesday 8th September 2010 10:04am for Chapter 4

You seem to have a penchant for including rape in your stories. I've only read three so far but in all you've used it in one way or another... It's a bit of an easy out if you ask me.

No offense or anything intended, just seems a bit... Lazy?

-TST

Snag posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 10:17am for Chapter 4

"As some Muggle author had his character say once, ‘From here I see a tongue and fingers — everything else is gravy.’"

It's always a good time when someone can work in a Spider Robinson quote. Well played!

(Callahan's Secret, Mary talking to/about Mickey Finn, I do believe.)

JMandrake posted a comment on Tuesday 8th January 2008 1:17pm for Chapter 4

Well, I am not going to lie when I say that the rape thing with dud threw me off the story. I mean it might be leading up to something in the plot, but since I haven't read the whole story then I can't be sure, but i'll keep reading.

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Wednesday 28th November 2007 11:30am for Chapter 4

Cool cool. Interesting twist with the rape thing. Poor Harry.

Sdarian posted a comment on Sunday 14th October 2007 4:13pm for Chapter 4

Regardless of whatever happened to him, if she wants it and he is as set to pleasing her as he seems to be, I think he would do it. Of course, the main factor of my argument is that she wants it, and is deriving pleasure from it, then there is really no problem with it. Hell, maybe they could pass it off as helping him get over his issues. Although, running off to Albus about this is rather childish I think. I mean, she's an auror. If there is an issue with the law (which there probably is) she needs to go to her office and have them go through whatever procedures they have for it. If they, for whatever reason, don't want to go that route, then just do it themselves. They do have magic after all.

xBizzle posted a comment on Sunday 8th October 2006 8:29am for Chapter 4

OOOOK. The one thing that was totally crap for brains about this chapter was the whole Harry being raped by Dudley and his gang. Instead of all the he and Tonks should've explored the back door penetration game. I mean c'mon...what 15 year old wouldn't be interested in that...especially with a 21 year old??? Again, I liked the chapter except for that bit. Onto the next....

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Wednesday 28th June 2006 8:00am for Chapter 4

Oh, poor Harry!

thealphamale posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:25pm for Chapter 4

Thank you for ruining a good story by adding a completly ridiculus rape in there. Their is no way in hell that Harry would ever allow that to happen he would probably resort to using magic knowing that he would be expelled, but he would never let that happen, the idea is fucking dumb! You seem to forget how strong Harry is!

thealphamale posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:22pm for Chapter 4

Thank you for ruining a good story by adding a completly ridiculus rape in there. Their is no way in hell that Harry would ever allow that to happen he would probably resort to using magic knowing that he would be expelled, but he would never let that happen, the idea is fucking dumb!

DJ Rodriguez posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 4:38am for Chapter 4

Damn!! Dudley and his goons are sick! I hope that something happens to them soon, because I so really want to kick their ass!!

Nice job so far. Keep it up!

The Resident posted a comment on Sunday 13th November 2005 4:55pm for Chapter 4

You are portraying two people deeply in love both physically and emotionally with such great clarity that it makes my heart ache that there are too few examples of it in the real world. You're showing us this beautiful, wonderful and rare sight in such a caring way all wrapped up in the HP universe. Thank you.

JJ Marsden posted a comment on Friday 28th October 2005 10:53am for Chapter 4

A Spider fan? Writing HP fics? My life is complete. A marvellous line; Mickey Finn and Harry should never meet - the combined angst might create a black hole or something. My copy of Off the Wall is rarely away when I'm writing; there's so much useful stuff in it for every occasion. Cracking so far; I'll leave a proper review at the end. May I expect some more stinkers?