Harry Potter and the Paradigm Shift
Chapter 11
By Kinsfire
Reviews
Tammy Driver posted a comment on Friday 27th February 2009 12:43am for Chapter 11
What is Sisyphean effort?
mashimaromadness posted a comment on Wednesday 12th December 2007 6:03pm for Chapter 11
Dumbledore is in cahoots (great word) with Voldemort now? Wow, I'm fascinated. I can't wait to read on. Ahh, another task for another day...
Ppsh posted a comment on Monday 18th September 2006 7:29am for Chapter 11
What is with the bazillion monologues in this story? Harry keeps raving on with 3000 word long monologues everytime someone asks him something.
Other then that the only things which really irritated me were the 3,879,284 concidences which makes everything fit in perfectly. There is NO problems in this story, not a single one really. And the characters are all way way too... understanding, i mean seriously, even if you loved your friends it doesnt mean you'd have no problem with your girlfriends/boyfriends sleeping with them. Its ridiculous.
Kinsfire replied:
I recommend that you do a little reading about NaNoWriMo at http://www.nanowrimo.org - that should explain quite a bit of it for you. A hint - the motto of the contest is "Quantity, not Quality." It was my attempt to write 100,000 words in a single month.
If it's good in some people's eyes, that's wonderful. If it's not, at least I got to 95,000 words before the month was out.
It's not to everyone's taste. Nothing anyone writes is to everyone's taste.
The Resident posted a comment on Sunday 13th November 2005 10:03pm for Chapter 11
Well, it looks like Harry's achieved that sexual maturity I was hoping for in a previous review.
The spy being Dumbledore is kind of what I fighred given his being so manipulative and who died on his way to being Minister. Keep up the good work.
slashslut posted a comment on Thursday 21st January 2010 11:36pm for Chapter 11