mashimaromadness posted a comment on Sunday 25th November 2007 12:58pm for Coming Together

She's a witch? Strange twist. I don't know if Harry's brian is so much Dursley-twisted but society-twisted. I mean, that's not to say the Dursley's didn't screw him up, but his hesitation and fear of "perversion" comes more from society in general than the Dursely's, I would think. But yeah, I liked it. And the pun IS funny...

spedclass101 posted a comment on Saturday 19th May 2007 12:07pm for Coming Together

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

Dragen posted a comment on Friday 9th March 2007 11:10pm for Coming Together

What another great chapter;

So Hermione is happy to share Harry with Jocelyn. Hermione and Jocelyn want to share eachother with eachother... as well as Harry. At first Harry would say no to this, but I'm happy that he agrees with it too.

When you got to the sex sceen of the story, what can I say; it was HOT. And oh boy, thanks to the sex, Joss is seem to be a witch now... nice.

noylj posted a comment on Sunday 4th March 2007 10:37am for Coming Together

There will be more? The sex is nice, but the exploration of feelings is better. Did their magics intertwin so now Joss is a witch?

Debbie Hollander posted a comment on Tuesday 27th February 2007 8:52am for Coming Together

I am so looking forward to an update and completion of this story. Please do not abandon this story even if Herman has given up on his writing.

Debbie Hollander posted a comment on Tuesday 9th January 2007 6:56am for Coming Together

please update soon. Iam curious as to how thisw will continue and end. I can hardly wait for an update. Please continue asap.
Sincerely,
Debbie

The Resident posted a comment on Wednesday 1st November 2006 5:42pm for Coming Together

The way you've written the story, I find it quite believable. Of course, Harry is, on the whole, more mature than your usual teenage boy. How well the pairing works out in the long run is mostly dependent on the lack of jealousy between the Hermione and her mom.

Keep up the great work and, as always, please, update soon (but don't let the quality drop).

morriganscrow posted a comment on Saturday 28th October 2006 2:22am for Coming Together

Yum.
Looking forward to the wrap-up. Great work!

xBizzle posted a comment on Friday 6th October 2006 11:37am for Coming Together

GGGGRRRRR BABY.....VERY GGGGRRRR!

Otritzi posted a comment on Thursday 28th September 2006 10:55am for Coming Together

Quite the discovery. I believe Harry and Hermoine being higly powerful mystics transferred a bit of their magic to Joss, making her a witch as well. That'll be a really interesting trick to pull off.

CoyoteScion posted a comment on Sunday 17th September 2006 3:15am for Coming Together

oh come on you can't leave it like that

John Fitzgerald posted a comment on Monday 11th September 2006 8:44am for Coming Together

I hope that you post again soon. Thanks.

Intelligo posted a comment on Sunday 10th September 2006 5:44am for Coming Together

Extremely hot! Please, one more chapter! I'd do anything for another lemon with these three!

You manage to incorporate sex and plot rather well in your stories.

Stygius posted a comment on Monday 4th September 2006 2:22pm for Coming Together

please finish the story.... i know its a short one, and there would only be another 2-3 chapters. i am eagerly awaiting what happens in the said next chapter. should be fun. i like how it has been going so far, congrats.... when can we expect an update???

Debbie Hollander posted a comment on Saturday 24th June 2006 9:18am for Coming Together

this is alright.quite entertaining, can hardly wait to read what you write next.herman please update pheonix soon

Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Friday 16th June 2006 3:49am for Coming Together

OK, I've been putting this off for a while, but I really should review.

While I like the charaters, and have no objection to the sex, there doesn't seem to be any story there. I guess I like just a little more action in the story.

I'll keep reading (and I won't post a message that I hate it after reading all 25 chapters :-) but I hope the plot progresses.

Thanks for writing.

Tom A.

Terry Swain posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 7:09pm for Coming Together

Great chapter. and a most interesting development. :)

fanfic posted a comment on Wednesday 14th June 2006 1:56am for Coming Together

Such a short tale to be told. So which story will you work on next? Or will you be doing another all new story?

freakyfinger posted a comment on Wednesday 14th June 2006 12:49am for Coming Together

I just thought of an idea- have Frank come back and try to get Jocelyn back, and then let him learn about their relationship!

94caddy posted a comment on Saturday 10th June 2006 7:10pm for Coming Together

Excellent. Very hot can't wait to read more!