master posted a comment on Tuesday 20th July 2010 9:24am for Coming Home

this is a little strange

BloodRedJawz posted a comment on Sunday 22nd June 2008 6:15am for Coming Home

As great as this story is, I just think it's REALLY REALLY stupid how whenever the main character does something stupid and thinks he hurts other people because of it, he always something along the lines of "You're going to hate me once I tell you. I'll go pack my things as soon as I'm done telling you."

It's SO effing CORNY!

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Sunday 25th November 2007 12:24pm for Coming Home

Oh dear, that was dramatic. But appropriate. I wanted to commend you on some very realistic aspects to this story. The fact that Hermione took Frank's betrayal so much harder than her mom is very realistic, I know I took my dad's leaving a lot harder than his wife did. I liked how true that was. And it's overall a great story so far.

spedclass101 posted a comment on Saturday 19th May 2007 7:00am for Coming Home

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

Dragen posted a comment on Friday 9th March 2007 10:10pm for Coming Home

Poor Jocelyn and Hermione, how could Frank do that to them, I know things like that happen but still how could he do that to them.

Poor Harry fulling for Jocelyn... and now that she and Hermione know, all he wants to do is to leave... because he thought they would hate him... Poor Harry.

Debbie Hollander posted a comment on Wednesday 7th June 2006 9:40pm for Coming Home

this story is good please continue asap and for gods sake don't break up any of the characters Harry and Hermione make a great pair they should be able to work this out

cyberpurple posted a comment on Friday 2nd June 2006 7:28am for Coming Home

bravo, brilliant. Must. Have. More.

MichelleG posted a comment on Thursday 1st June 2006 1:52am for Coming Home

Good chapter. I can't wait to read the next update.

David M. Potter posted a comment on Wednesday 31st May 2006 11:58pm for Coming Home

I do hope the angst ends soon and they tell him a threesome is wonderful. Great fic.

Evan2 posted a comment on Wednesday 31st May 2006 9:45pm for Coming Home

Hey dude, great story, like your others. Could you plz tell me what stories you have decided to abandon, because I see a lot of unfinished stories that have a great start, but no finish, lol. I look forward to hearing from you

The Resident posted a comment on Tuesday 30th May 2006 4:07am for Coming Home

Another fine chapter (even though I could see that second to last chapter coming a mile away). -veg- It was well written and everything from the first paragraph to the last flowed smoothly from one to the next. I'm looking foward to the next chapter quite eagerly.
BTW, did you get that file I sent you and did you like it?

Alcatras posted a comment on Monday 29th May 2006 9:20pm for Coming Home

Harry realy has some sefl doubt problems.I hope that everything will turn out well somehow.
By the way yout writeing speed is very good.

Patches posted a comment on Monday 29th May 2006 9:12am for Coming Home

This is a very difficult story line for me to read right now but I can understand why Harry is attracted to Hermione's mother. I can also see why he and Hermione tried to do all they could to help Jocelyn. It will be interesting to see how you work this story out. Thanks for writing. pms

Mariposa posted a comment on Monday 29th May 2006 12:11am for Coming Home

Lovely ending! The view is just beautiful hanging off of this cliff!!!!!

But really this was a good ending. This chapter seemed rushed in parts and wonderfully detailed in others. And also for some reasone Hermione's character didn't seem consistent but it was more of a feeling and I can't give specifics. I know sucky general review. All in all I like it and I eagerly await more! :o)

Manatheron posted a comment on Sunday 28th May 2006 6:44am for Coming Home

Oooohh The angst and suspense are AWEFUL!

... I hope they last!

Renzo7 posted a comment on Sunday 28th May 2006 5:21am for Coming Home

awesome, keep it up!

Joshua Scuzz Jenkins posted a comment on Sunday 28th May 2006 4:14am for Coming Home

Kinsfire you completely and totally suck. you are such an excellent writer we can't help but be addicted to the stories then have to sit patiently waiting for more. it's just cruel.

annihilation posted a comment on Sunday 28th May 2006 12:31am for Coming Home

I already like the story.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Saturday 27th May 2006 2:55pm for Coming Home

Whoa!! Now that's quite an ending. The ensuing conversation between mother and daughter is likely to be "fascinating", to say the least.

Princess Fictoria posted a comment on Saturday 27th May 2006 1:45pm for Coming Home

Wow!

I thought this was going to be a shallow puff piece... but you have filled it with a surprising amount of emotional depth. The stunned reaction of the women and the intense emotional pain that Harry shared was enough to make me sniffle. I eagerly look forward to reading more!