DJ posted a comment on Friday 9th March 2007 12:50pm for Chapter 4

Nice work this was a fun chapter.

Jeremy Desat posted a comment on Friday 9th March 2007 12:19pm for Chapter 4

LOL
I like the 'tee hee heee' I hate the cliffie, but liked the 'tee hee heee'
Keep up the good work!

timte2002 posted a comment on Friday 9th March 2007 11:19am for Chapter 4

A fine read as usual. Hopefully the out-of-it author feels progressively better with time.

goddessa39 posted a comment on Friday 9th March 2007 10:19am for Chapter 4

Pregnant? hehehehehe

warpwizard posted a comment on Friday 9th March 2007 10:09am for Chapter 4

Ooooh, mean cliffie! :)

Predictable problem I think. :)

Great chapter, it was lots of fun.

Gwyn Raven posted a comment on Friday 9th March 2007 8:10am for Chapter 4

I really like this story. I hope you can update it again soon!

writerpayne posted a comment on Friday 9th March 2007 7:52am for Chapter 4

Can't belive you left it there.... meanie.. oh no std are a bitch lol... or is it 'that problem.'

Please update soon

Payne

Amamama posted a comment on Friday 9th March 2007 5:37am for Chapter 4

Frank the bastard really got it, huh? Or not, as it may be. Great revenge, though.

Nice idea with the retirement home for elves, and what's the problem coming up? Preggers, both of them, or something else?

Jeffrey1 posted a comment on Friday 9th March 2007 4:43am for Chapter 4

uhoh, more potters on the way.

Srikanth posted a comment on Friday 9th March 2007 4:35am for Chapter 4

Its been forever since i last read the previous parts. had to go for a RECAP. hmmmm interesting i say....