Alorkin posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd May 2006 12:16pm

Well, Keith, if this don't give the bumblebee a freakin' heart attack, nothing will! I wonder how he's going to react when he finds out. Snape, of course, will simply say: "Just like his insufferable father. The boy has no sense ofresponsibility. He should stay where he is placed and serve as a sitting target for Voldemort." Or something like that. I wonder, how is Fleur going to fit into this? Will she rat them out, or join in the partay. PLease update this soon. Alorkin

Kenji posted a comment on Friday 28th April 2006 10:25pm

Like the story, reallllly think you need to update though.

Darrell1 posted a comment on Tuesday 25th April 2006 2:59pm

Interesting Not bad Not bad keep it coming

Cedric posted a comment on Tuesday 11th April 2006 7:37pm

nice story u've got going on...im interested to see how things pan out

nurray posted a comment on Thursday 30th March 2006 3:54am

I like this one and I would like to see it continued, though I can see that you already have quite a few stories in various stages of completion that this isn't a priority at this time.

Harry's reaction to the sexually aggressive Hermione is what I would expect from Harry, you do need a beter reason for Hermione to be the overtly sexual person she is displaying here.

Maybe later on when Harry and Hermione's relationship settles down she admits she played the "tart" role in order that Harry wouldn't leave her behind. harry has been a big part of her life and she was terrified by the idea of Harry not being there for her. Not the best of ideas but maybe something you can work with.

Potter Thinker posted a comment on Tuesday 28th March 2006 12:54pm

You better get writing cause this is giving me ideas. If you do not act soon, all post on my site.

Jimbocous posted a comment on Friday 24th March 2006 3:57pm

OK, so nice start. Hope you'll continue with it. I see possibilities :)

LegalAlien posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd March 2006 4:34pm

That was an awesome start for this story, Keith!
I can't wait to read on, so I hope you'll have time to write more soon! :)

Nick5 posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd March 2006 8:18am

Hmm, nice, particularly with the character development as it is so far. I'm guessing it's Fleur that's speaking at the end - should be fun. More, soon, please.

ArxSerpens posted a comment on Tuesday 21st March 2006 8:40am

She blushed. "And I'd love to be able to tell girls that you fucked me all the way from England to France."

LMFAO, great :p

Zaxxon posted a comment on Tuesday 21st March 2006 12:31am

Very interesting...
I do love Harry+Hermione... of course, I also love Harry+Fluer, Harry+Bellatrix, Harry+Narcissa, Harry+Tonks, and the wonderful Harry/Harem...

If you go Harry+Hermione or Harry/Harem, either way, you're off to a great start.

Frank LeTanc posted a comment on Monday 20th March 2006 1:31pm

this story is great! I hope it doesnt get pushed too far on the back burner though, and has some regularly scheduled updates.

SerendipitousNightcrawler posted a comment on Sunday 19th March 2006 4:38am

Ooh, a story about Harry and Hermione backpacking through Europe, how much fun! I do hope that Fleur, or whomever that is, doesn't take them back. I'd love to see you take them from Brussels to Copenhagen to Prague, throughout Tuscany, down to Rome and so many other places before going back to Hogwarts (or Beauxbatons maybe instead).

How high is this little babble on your docket?

shlager_5321 posted a comment on Saturday 18th March 2006 10:25pm

update soon!!!

goofy posted a comment on Saturday 18th March 2006 4:19pm

I like It more please

cheers

Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Saturday 18th March 2006 3:26pm

Yikes! Not as clean a getaway as they'd hoped, eh? Good start. I look forward to the next chapter!

Elle T posted a comment on Saturday 18th March 2006 2:09pm

Hey
very very good so far
umm i can't wait for the next chapter and plu im guessing that the person who said that last sentence was Hagrid

was i right or are you just going to keep me in suspention until the next chapter

either way let me know

here is my e-mail add

elle_eleanor@hotmail.com

Thankx
Cya

Elle

Terry Swain posted a comment on Saturday 18th March 2006 1:45pm

This is a great story. wouldn't you know it they still run into a delacour. :)

Muirnin Cocan posted a comment on Saturday 18th March 2006 12:37pm

You've STARTED another one???

*LOL* I'm still searching for my lost work! I hate that my HD got fried with all the new stuff I got written... hopefully one day I can get it retrieved...

I look forward to reading more of this.. as well as reading more of the OTHER's you have already got started (that is a subtle hint!)

Keep the work coming Oh Sir Kinsfire...

As Always,
Muirnin - the Desperately seeking Queen Mum

Kinsfire replied:

This is actually a story that I'd had for a while.

I've gotten so anal about having backups that it'll be hard for me to ever completely lose a story.

I may pick this one up sometime soon, though.   I've got some ideas for it percolating up from the depths.

Jason Karr posted a comment on Saturday 18th March 2006 12:14pm

how are you going to hide Hermione's parents when the time comes. I like the way you have writen both Harry and Hermione. And how long are you going to try to keep these two away from the headmaster.