vertru posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 1:13pm

Good job on this Keith, a very well written chapter indeed. I thought it was interesting how you made Gabrielle much older than she appeared in GoF, and just as exciting how she reacted to the two of them. Should be some wonderful scenes to write later, *laugh* I'm quite enjoying this story, it is very different from the usual 6th year story so far, and seeing what they do walking all over Europe should be fun as well.

Vern

Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 12:34pm

Excellent story, Keith. I look forward to Hermione having to get tough in managing Harry's bedroom life. At some point there should be a girl that gets invited to their bed and then tries to take over as the prime, until Hermione lays down the law. I always hope for a relationship story that has the conflict from outside the primary couple. It is depressing to read about Harry making mistakes and insulting or trying to leave his girlfriend "for her safety" without telling her.

Down with angst!

Mike (MoA)

AzureSky posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 12:32pm

Great chapter.

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 12:03pm

Harry had better hope that Fleur and Bill Weasley never break up. (Yes; I *can* see Fleur putting in a resume to join Harry's Hotties.) And while Cho Chang or *Downtown* Lavender Brown may be more interested in the BWL, that isn't necessarily true of the Patils, or even DeLuscious Daphne Greengrass (or even, don't laugh, *Millicent Bulstrode*).

Matt15 posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 11:58am

You know, this seems to be turning into a Harry/Multi-Harem type story. That's awesome. Wish i could see some of those three-somes in action though.

Muirnin Cocan posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 10:37am

I just noted that I had posted a review in the prologue but then I found that I had posted a review there already! I was SHOCKED I had not posted a review for London...

Well that has been corrected!

Please TRY to keep this to Harry and Hermione with knowledge that it will be a Moresome AFTER the story is over! I know that is difficult for you... given the type of writing you do... which in all honesty I enjoy immensely given my vicariousness through my reading of highly erotic fan fiction...

Did that even make sense? I love how you had Fluer teach Hermione a spell to lose the bra permanently... Oh I wish that form of magic was real with OUT surgery!

This is delightful and I am enjoying it... even IF you are writing more stories! At least you update (unlike your's truly) I need to get writing...

I need more MUSE for my writing and less depression Keep up the great work and I look forward to whatever you have coming up next!

As Always,
Jennie

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 10:29am

*chuckle* Well worth the wait and developing quite nicely. It's going to be interesting to watch their relationship develop with time. The likely humorous counterpoint of Dumbledore's frantic attempts to track Harry down should prove entertaining, too.

Muirnin Cocan posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 10:27am

I absolutely love the story mainly because I got the chance to re-read the story since it has been SOOOOO long between chapters! *wink*

I adore how you had Harry take Hermione's virginity from England to France ... that is priceless.

Well I am going to go on with the story... I hope you keep the focus on Harry and Hermione (even given your proclivity to make it moresomes...) I live vicariously through fan fiction ... and I am fascinated by Harry and Hermione...

As Always,
Muirnin - who thinks you need to e-mail her soon regarding my story!

Muirnin Cocan posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 10:17am

Did you know that when the story is in Print mode there is no room to write a review???

I had no idea!

You know how I am about Harry and Hermione ... I live VICARIOUSLY through their passion and desire and am so thrilled to see that you have added to this story as well...

So why pray tell am I writing a review on the Prologue when you wrote a NEW chapter... simple... just to write a review and say HI!!! remember me!

I love this story and can't wait for it to be continued...


As Always,
Muirnin - who is always passionate about the Discovery (Remember my ship from my Star Trek days IS the USS Discovery!)

Alexis posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 10:03am

Awwww... what a cute chapter! I think this fic is very fun. I'm glad to see Harry out of DD's grasp and I love the H/HR love. Great job!

Philipe posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 9:31am

I like it.. Didi you know for a moment there i thought you're going to make this just a HHr fic? I don't mind it either, but i like it better with more women.. Lemon aside, the implication and problems that you can work on are more interesting.. A nice chapter.. And i like Brussels.. Will they visit museums, historical places or just an escape? I think it would be fun of the if they were to get in trouble in some famous places.. Cliche, but you usualy work very nice around that, so..

P.

Robin Westerly posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 9:09am

Its really good, but having read everything of yours on this site, four times over, it is maybe not quite up to your usual standards.
Still thankyou of a new story.

hoser41 posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 9:06am

What happened to chapter 2?

avram posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 8:52am

Additionally, on your stories page this is listed as having three chapters. I hope this gets fixed soon, as I don't recall if I have read the previous chapter.

Sorry for the double-post.

avram posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 8:51am

Is there a chapter missing here? I assume so, since we go from Harry leaving 4 Privet Drive to him already having Hermione, in more than one sense.

Good writing, as usual.

Kinsfire replied:

Very weird - I just checked it out, and it goes Prologue, London, Brussels.   You may have caught this while I was renaming the middle chapter from something as unimaginative as Chapter 1, which was it's old name.   There are three chapters, though, if you count the Prologue.

whyshouldicare posted a comment on Monday 5th June 2006 4:06am

i loved it. very realistic,to me that is. please keep going

Kenji posted a comment on Wednesday 31st May 2006 11:26am

Reread the story and found a flaw. The flaw is that it moves to fast

harry31 posted a comment on Thursday 25th May 2006 10:38pm

this is a very good story i liked it very much i am waiting for the next chapter

Minerva Granger posted a comment on Wednesday 17th May 2006 7:55pm

Don't let Fleur send them back. Please.

Life's a Dance posted a comment on Tuesday 16th May 2006 12:09pm

Please don't let this one go to the bottom of the pile...It's just getting good! Update soon please!