Discovery

Sean Dillon posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 11:52pm

I'd forgotten about this story. Glad that you didn't.

sean

Ken Warner posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 11:44pm

I haven't been to Brussels since 1980 - but I certainly would like to go back and make a few nice memories similiar to the ones that Harry and Hermione are making.
Thanks for the very enjoyable chapter - it really doesn't seem to matter which of your stories you update, the updates are always a treasure.
warmest regards
PS They should not be allowed to leave Brussels without a tour of the Cote D'Or chocolate factory - next to the Gare du Midi and some sort of confrontation at the Atomium.

Chris1 posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 8:23pm

Nice chapter, altough I'm starting to dislike the guilt-happy characters you seem to like writing. :D

Actually, it's not the fact that they're so guilt-happy. it's the fact that they don't let go of the guilt that bothers me. :)

Chris

PS: Can we get more detail once you get to the f/f/m sex scenes? :D

Lionsgate posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 7:58pm

Looks more than promesing : go on please

Bernd Jacobitz posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 7:02pm

Good one again! i like the twist you gave the story.

UdderPD posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 6:22pm

A very nice start along with some very interesting ideas for development.

TTFN UdderPD

Alex00 posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 5:35pm

Wonderful chapter.

Terry Swain posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 5:16pm

That was a great chapter. :)

AK posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 2:53pm

Where is the fire? This story has an extremely rushed feel to it. It does show "some" possibilities but I see nothing very new...

japanese_jew posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 2:44pm

I couldn't deal with how easy it was for Hermione and Harry to admit their feelings, so I'm afraid that I won't be reading the next chapter-- but... whenever I read a story that has a scene with two people in a bed, who really like each other, but don't want to admit it, I'm deeply remind of "The Sure Thing", the '85 film. I just really loved that scene. Whenever anyone else does it, I kind of wish that they had scene the film, and taken a few pointers. That was skilled film-making.

Ron posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 2:39pm

I like the way you write and think, Keith. I honestly think that you might be one of the few that actually LEARNED the message in TEFL: it's not the sex, as good as that is, it's the love!

scott2 posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 2:31pm

A less angsty guilt ridden harry, unlike your other works, I whole heartedly approve, and I'm a sucker for H/Hr ship.

Great work and hope for more soon :)

Jason Karr posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 2:23pm

this is a nice chapter. I hope you take these two home just long enuf to get harry's godfater's will read and hermione' folks ok on a marrige for these two.

Rogue posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 2:18pm

Interesting, but you seem to have little true plot to the story at this point. While a good plot isn't required for something written to simply explore what can be done and place the reactions of characters around Europe, if the story is going to have any purpose beyond that, I think you need to start introducing it soon.

Either way, keep up the good work.

Boo55 posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 2:01pm

Gotta love the stories you write. This one included. Harry finally getting some. We need more authors to write about how Harry finds out why life is worth living. Please post a couple dozen more chapters...you don't need sleep

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