crs_seq posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 5:41pm

That was hot. would have loved if there was a smut scene on the train. Hope there will some smut in the upcoming chapters. Very good explanation on hermione's forward behavior.
Anyways Update soon.

Katherine posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 5:19pm

Is the female Fleur, Gabrielle or Madam Maxine? Will who ever it is find a way to perhaps enroll Harry and Hermione into the French Magic School? If that is what they want. Or help them find a place to hide out where Dumbledore wouldn't think to look. Just hope they don’t tell Dumbledore they saw Harry. Hope to see another chapter soon.

Alex00 posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 5:16pm

Awsome work I can't wait for more.

James Benfield posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 5:12pm

great story! Normally I'd think Hermione was being to OOC, but you explained that away by her wanting him to notice her. You have covered all of you tracks so far, and I can't wait to see the rest of this! Great job!

James

goddessa39 posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 4:41pm

Cool. I love indepedent Harry-Manip. Dumblesbad too!

Voldemort is Dead posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 4:05pm

I really do not like slash stories. Do not do that to Harry, or any of the other characters. That is sick.

I would prefer that Harry would be on his own.

After reading HBP. Harry does not need a romantic involvment with Ginny. I do not like her.

Also, after watching my DVD copy of HPGOF, I am not that thrilled of Ron. Harry deserves a better friend than Ron.

Don't pair Harry with anyone. He needs to be single.

Renzo7 posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 4:04pm

great story, though i don't like the way harry looks down upon himself so much... nice job on getting the naughty librarian out of hermione.

Prince Charon posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 3:34pm

You're very good at this.

More soon, I hope.

freakyfinger posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 3:19pm

Well, Its a good start in my opinion. Is that Fleur or Gabrielle at the end?

DarkPhoenix2500 posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 3:18pm

@_@ Uhm....wow, its a bit odd, ill admit <_< their relationship seems to be moving fast....yet knowing each other for roughly 5 years i can see thats its resonable o_O Update soon...

AmeSuisei/AdronTaltos/CarlOort posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 3:05pm

::blinks:: Okay i like it..
Write more! or else i'll rent a house elf and send them to 'assist' you in your efforts.. I know they can be quite insistant when they need be...

jake m posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 2:53pm

i think u on to somehting keep writing and dam fast

HPpassion posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 2:37pm

cute very cute

Treck posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 2:24pm

Damn. You know how to leave a guy wanting more.

red jacobson1 posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 2:11pm

interesting beginning; and i'm curious to see where it goes.

looking forward to more

red

David Thacker posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 1:23pm

Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

mac_gin posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 12:59pm

French accent, guess it's Fleur or Gabby - But who is she supposed to be meeting? suspect Billy boy, so do they go hide with the dragon bloke???

Coupdmain posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 12:24pm

looking good...so is that Fleur or Gabriel

anyways... there seems to be a problem in the chapter index for the story, it does not list out the chapters.

Axision posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 12:02pm

Ohhh! Like it so far. A Harry/Hermione on the run has lots of potential - dodging Death Eaters, Order of the Turkey Basters, and the Ministry; traveling to new and interesting places; learning lots and lots new, obscure (and illeagal) magic; all the while exporing their relationship. Good stuff.
There does seem to be a problem with the website though: chapter count is three, but only two found; the story index page is empty; and there is no navigation between chapters. Methinks some database data is still playing hooky and needs a stern talking to.

Daniel Hensley posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 11:52am

This is good so far but I seem to be having trouble loading between chapters.