Terry Swain posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 5:16pm for Brussels

That was a great chapter. :)

AK posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 2:53pm for Brussels

Where is the fire? This story has an extremely rushed feel to it. It does show "some" possibilities but I see nothing very new...

Ron posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 2:39pm for Brussels

I like the way you write and think, Keith. I honestly think that you might be one of the few that actually LEARNED the message in TEFL: it's not the sex, as good as that is, it's the love!

scott2 posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 2:31pm for Brussels

A less angsty guilt ridden harry, unlike your other works, I whole heartedly approve, and I'm a sucker for H/Hr ship.

Great work and hope for more soon :)

Jason Karr posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 2:23pm for Brussels

this is a nice chapter. I hope you take these two home just long enuf to get harry's godfater's will read and hermione' folks ok on a marrige for these two.

Rogue posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 2:18pm for Brussels

Interesting, but you seem to have little true plot to the story at this point. While a good plot isn't required for something written to simply explore what can be done and place the reactions of characters around Europe, if the story is going to have any purpose beyond that, I think you need to start introducing it soon.

Either way, keep up the good work.

Boo55 posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 2:01pm for Brussels

Gotta love the stories you write. This one included. Harry finally getting some. We need more authors to write about how Harry finds out why life is worth living. Please post a couple dozen more chapters...you don't need sleep

bjon66 posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 1:40pm for Brussels

This is a hot little story...lol.. Can't wait for
another update...

kcgx23 posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 1:34pm for Brussels

Great chapter, what is the situation with Gabrielle? Update soon.

Robert McCurry posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 1:28pm for Brussels

Nice story so far....please keep it comeing

Wolff posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 1:18pm for Brussels

This is shaping up to be a killer story. Keep it coming!

John Wilburn posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 1:13pm for Brussels

Excellent as usual. You are still the master of these kind of tale.
John

vertru posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 1:13pm for Brussels

Good job on this Keith, a very well written chapter indeed. I thought it was interesting how you made Gabrielle much older than she appeared in GoF, and just as exciting how she reacted to the two of them. Should be some wonderful scenes to write later, *laugh* I'm quite enjoying this story, it is very different from the usual 6th year story so far, and seeing what they do walking all over Europe should be fun as well.

Vern

Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 12:34pm for Brussels

Excellent story, Keith. I look forward to Hermione having to get tough in managing Harry's bedroom life. At some point there should be a girl that gets invited to their bed and then tries to take over as the prime, until Hermione lays down the law. I always hope for a relationship story that has the conflict from outside the primary couple. It is depressing to read about Harry making mistakes and insulting or trying to leave his girlfriend "for her safety" without telling her.

Down with angst!

Mike (MoA)

AzureSky posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 12:32pm for Brussels

Great chapter.

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 12:03pm for Brussels

Harry had better hope that Fleur and Bill Weasley never break up. (Yes; I *can* see Fleur putting in a resume to join Harry's Hotties.) And while Cho Chang or *Downtown* Lavender Brown may be more interested in the BWL, that isn't necessarily true of the Patils, or even DeLuscious Daphne Greengrass (or even, don't laugh, *Millicent Bulstrode*).

Matt15 posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 11:58am for Brussels

You know, this seems to be turning into a Harry/Multi-Harem type story. That's awesome. Wish i could see some of those three-somes in action though.

Muirnin Cocan posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 10:37am for Brussels

I just noted that I had posted a review in the prologue but then I found that I had posted a review there already! I was SHOCKED I had not posted a review for London...

Well that has been corrected!

Please TRY to keep this to Harry and Hermione with knowledge that it will be a Moresome AFTER the story is over! I know that is difficult for you... given the type of writing you do... which in all honesty I enjoy immensely given my vicariousness through my reading of highly erotic fan fiction...

Did that even make sense? I love how you had Fluer teach Hermione a spell to lose the bra permanently... Oh I wish that form of magic was real with OUT surgery!

This is delightful and I am enjoying it... even IF you are writing more stories! At least you update (unlike your's truly) I need to get writing...

I need more MUSE for my writing and less depression Keep up the great work and I look forward to whatever you have coming up next!

As Always,
Jennie

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 10:29am for Brussels

*chuckle* Well worth the wait and developing quite nicely. It's going to be interesting to watch their relationship develop with time. The likely humorous counterpoint of Dumbledore's frantic attempts to track Harry down should prove entertaining, too.

Alexis posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 10:03am for Brussels

Awwww... what a cute chapter! I think this fic is very fun. I'm glad to see Harry out of DD's grasp and I love the H/HR love. Great job!