Michael Foerster posted a comment on Friday 16th June 2006 4:09pm for Brussels

Oh, the possibilities:
- Fleur making sure Dumble + the Order seek in the worng part of Europe, maybe even the world, and consequentally so do the DE's. Hmm, that could be the summer of DE takeout, Harry comes back and there's only Moldishorts left.
- or like from an other Reviewer said, similar to Rorschach's Blot's "Make a wish" leave behind a trail of dead or otherwise permanently taken out DE's due accidents without any influence from Harry and Hermione themselfs.
- an other possiblity would be a string of 'Meeting the Masters', through their 'Tour de Europe' they keep meeting masters in magic, each with their on speciality, to learn from them.
- For an extra laugh, you could even have the Unspeakables setup an training course for H+H, without their knowlege even. Have them come back to Hogwards, and set an 'offical' meeting between Harry's DOM-crew and the Unspeakables, to discuss further training, just in spite of Dumbles trying to hinder them.

Last, but not least: Thanks for the update.
Cheers, MiFo

snakehulk posted a comment on Friday 16th June 2006 2:29pm for Brussels

great story, please update quick

Prince Charon posted a comment on Friday 16th June 2006 11:12am for Brussels

Very, very interesting.

Thank you for the update.

I'm not sure which of your fics I most want to see updated, this or 'It Started One Summer'.

justme posted a comment on Friday 16th June 2006 9:56am for Brussels

Nicely done.

I'm hoping that no one finds them until school starts. Or, maybe have Tonks use Hedwig to track them down, but instead of turning them in, she stays with them as 'bodygaurd' (after hearing Harry's 'Tale of Woe') until school starts (sleeping three in a two-person tent {grin}), and then she escorts them to Hogsmeade on the First.

Is there some rule that says that everyone has to ride the Hogwarts Express or can Harry and Hermione just 'show up' at the depot in Hogsmeade as the train pulls into the station to drop everyone off?

Or better yet... since Harry is emancipated, can he just disillusion them and they can mingle in with the crowd as they enter the Great Hall and, quietly canceling the spell, act casual ...like they'd been with everyone all along. "Missing...? We weren't missing. We knew right where we were all the time.

Hope the next chapter arrives soon, it looks to be a great summer.

Alcatras posted a comment on Friday 16th June 2006 8:10am for Brussels

I was wondering whe you would continue some of your other FF`s
Good chapter by the way.

Patches posted a comment on Friday 16th June 2006 7:32am for Brussels

Very good. I like this story. It is getting more complicated but I'm not surprised since it is you Kinsfire! Please continue. I really like your stories. pms

Sherman Cater posted a comment on Friday 16th June 2006 5:27am for Brussels

Thank you for another episode in this great story. I noticed that Gabrielle never got to give Harry that kiss on the cheek. Is there something significant about this?

I look forward to the next chapter of whatever story you produce next.

Ben Russell-Gough posted a comment on Friday 16th June 2006 4:54am for Brussels

I love this story, I really do. No heavy issues, no unnecessary angst, just Harry trying to work out how to live (something that his past has left him singularly unprepared to do).

I only ask one favour - If the harem bug bites, please restrict it to three or less girls. Having too many around clogs up the story and slows the action. Not that I would particularly object to Harry with Ginny, Hermione and Gabrielle. It is just that too much sugar spoils the broth, y'know?

Enough of my objections, though. Overall, I think that you got the characterisations right here. I wonder if Harry and Hermione are going to end up being like "Mr Black" in "Make A Wish" by Rosharchblot - A legendary force against evil... mostly by accident whilst trying to have an uninterrupted holiday.

Looking forward to more.

BenRG's Rating: 8/10

coulsdoneagle posted a comment on Friday 16th June 2006 3:58am for Brussels

Hurrah! About time this little gem got an update. So glad it's not abandoned. Have you ever visited Brussels?

Kinsfire replied:

It was part of the reason that I chose Brussels.   I've been to both Brussels and Paris, but did not like Paris at all.   So when I saw that the EuroStar trains go to Brussels...

LoggingInSucksAss posted a comment on Friday 16th June 2006 2:33am for Brussels

Wow... this is NOT a story to be kept on the back burner. It's uber-hot and has tons of possibilities!

I have to question the teen+ rating, though. You're pushing that limit really hard right now, but why not just go for it? This isn't fanfiction.net after all - let it all hang out!

James Barber posted a comment on Friday 16th June 2006 2:07am for Brussels

Ooh this is getting good, you are one hell of a romantic and sexual active writer. But your bad at math, today date is friday June 16, 2006 not June 17 like you have on your story!

I guess the multi-sex partners you have in your head floating around kinda distracted ya, uh? hehehehehehe

Alorkin posted a comment on Friday 16th June 2006 1:09am for Brussels

Yet another great chapter from the master! At the end of chapter two, i half expected Fleur to invite Harry and Hermione to her chalet in order to hide from Dumbles.
The only (tiny) gripe I found was the physical development of little Gabby. I thought the veela were supposed to be etherial, almost whispy. NNot many whisps are that well liked by the titty fairy.
OK, nuff sed on that (extremely minor) subject.
Hermione returned from the ladies room with a new-found confidence. Well writ, sez I.
Godiva chocolate is wonderful! a bit pricy, but wonderful nonetheless. I can see how Hermuione might squee when she gets them.
The sex is simpe and intense. I liked the idea that they never reached the bed. (I used that in one of my novels, several years ago.)
I really loved the humor you've managed to inject into this stlry. Lovemaking should be fun, with bad puns and tickles.
As always, I await the next chapter of which ever story you are working on. Alorkin

Minerva Granger posted a comment on Friday 16th June 2006 1:06am for Brussels

Well done, mate. Be proud of yourself, as usual. This was a great update. More please, whenever you can.

Sean Dillon posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 11:52pm for Brussels

I'd forgotten about this story. Glad that you didn't.

sean

Ken Warner posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 11:44pm for Brussels

I haven't been to Brussels since 1980 - but I certainly would like to go back and make a few nice memories similiar to the ones that Harry and Hermione are making.
Thanks for the very enjoyable chapter - it really doesn't seem to matter which of your stories you update, the updates are always a treasure.
warmest regards
PS They should not be allowed to leave Brussels without a tour of the Cote D'Or chocolate factory - next to the Gare du Midi and some sort of confrontation at the Atomium.

Chris1 posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 8:23pm for Brussels

Nice chapter, altough I'm starting to dislike the guilt-happy characters you seem to like writing. :D

Actually, it's not the fact that they're so guilt-happy. it's the fact that they don't let go of the guilt that bothers me. :)

Chris

PS: Can we get more detail once you get to the f/f/m sex scenes? :D

Lionsgate posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 7:58pm for Brussels

Looks more than promesing : go on please

Bernd Jacobitz posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 7:02pm for Brussels

Good one again! i like the twist you gave the story.

UdderPD posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 6:22pm for Brussels

A very nice start along with some very interesting ideas for development.

TTFN UdderPD

Alex00 posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 5:35pm for Brussels

Wonderful chapter.