Death Isn't All It's Cracked Up To Be
Chapter 4
By Kinsfire
Reviews
Endlessdesk posted a comment on Thursday 6th October 2005 5:16pm for Chapter 4
I loved this story, even though somethings didn't quite click, for example the fact that Snape's resentment faded rather quickly. But overall, good job and i was wondering on when you'd have a sequel or even one at all.
Coolone007 posted a comment on Thursday 6th October 2005 6:18am for Chapter 4
it was a great story. It was interesting to wrap my mind around the freindship of Satin and Jesus. So Since he is marrying the lord of darkenss will her punishment be finsdished as well? Since you did mention that Hell was rehab. And she was cast into it for rehab. Too bad you ended it so quick I was couriouse to see your theories on the church of potter.
Mike posted a comment on Friday 30th September 2005 8:58am for Chapter 4
very nice stories man......first thing i read on here was Like A Phoenix From The Ashes and i read that past the first chapter and onto the last one you put up and now i just got finished reading the last chapter of Death Isn't All It's Cracked Up To Be and that is also a very great story you made there as well....anyways glad to have given you something to read as a compliment on your stories and keep putting up more cause they are one thing......GREAT
Adam posted a comment on Monday 26th September 2005 6:51pm for Chapter 4
Now this was a lot of fun to read first thing in the morning :)
Machiavelli Jr posted a comment on Sunday 25th September 2005 8:01am for Chapter 4
Bizarre, OOS, slightly icky, very funny. The dour Yorkshireman in me wants to threaten you with eternal hellfire, except that you'd grin and probably enjoy whatever you actually ended up with, so I'll settle for congrats, thanks and WRITE MORE!
sylvain pelletier posted a comment on Thursday 1st September 2005 9:22am for Chapter 4
I was almost right about Satan in the pool...
Nice open ending. Could have been longer but sequels (lots of them I hope) will be interesting.
I'm a big fan of Heinlein and approve the idea of the Long family (and the Potter family)
Now for a few phrases that caught my eyes:
"Can I keep him Daddy?"
THAT made me laugh loudly while I was reading during break at the office. At least, no one was around... Now I don't dare read at work... even during breaks.
"Gives a whole new meaning to the term 'GOD-son', doesn't it?"
I love that kind of pun (mines are sometimes as bad (or good) as that one).
dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Sunday 28th August 2005 9:57am for Chapter 4
Very Heinlein. Nice work.
Ken Warner posted a comment on Thursday 25th August 2005 3:42pm for Chapter 4
Truly an ending worth waiting for - your usual fabulously entertaining and thought provoking story. Having Harry be a diety, through the mechanism of selflessness and loving kindness is wonderously imaginative.
Thanks so much
Best Regards
Hagrid posted a comment on Thursday 25th August 2005 9:15am for Chapter 4
And now, I have a story for you. When I was a small child, attending Sunday school around the age of 5 or 6 the kids were sent off to color pictures of regilous scenes while the adults were given whatever form of the speach that was believed. I chose to color the robes of Jesus a sky blue, and was severely repremanded. I was told in no uncertain terms that His robes were brown. I have not bothered to return for almost 50 years. It says something to me about you that you also chose a shade of blue for him to wear.
Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Thursday 25th August 2005 2:31am for Chapter 4
You forgot one VERY important scene, Lucius, Draco, and the other death eaters in Azkaban being forced to attend services at the church of Potter. Outstanding ending, I enjoyed it thoroughly, thank you.
Doc posted a comment on Wednesday 24th August 2005 9:52pm for Chapter 4
Keith, please, oh please do a follow up piece to this I loved te way you've left the ending truely open for a sequel.
this was great I mean it abisolutely GREAT!!!!
Doc
Olafr posted a comment on Wednesday 24th August 2005 3:08pm for Chapter 4
It's always tricky to write about powerful characters, an supernally powerful are the most difficult. I think you took the right track - maybe an appearance to right the direction of his church might have been good, but in balance I think you got it right.
Now, onwards and upwards!
- Olafr.
patrik svensson posted a comment on Sunday 16th October 2005 9:02am for Chapter 4