Dark Clouds
Chapter 5
By Kinsfire
Reviews
Jason Schulz posted a comment on Friday 13th April 2007 2:35pm for Chapter 5
love the story so far... can't wait until the next chapter..... and makes me glad i've got my lady! ;)
Particle_Accelerator posted a comment on Thursday 12th April 2007 6:07am for Chapter 5
Admirable, Harry showing restraint and some overtures of forgiveness. So, does Hermione REALLY want to be with Harry, or is she just trying everything she can to get back on his good side. I'm rooting for the former... (of course!)
Manatheron posted a comment on Wednesday 11th April 2007 2:23pm for Chapter 5
{shakes head}
Nice to see an update, Interesting reactions there at the end too. I'm wondering however why I'm getting visions of an eventual Harem... or at least a multiple partner scene...
Wolfric posted a comment on Wednesday 11th April 2007 12:26pm for Chapter 5
Good chapter, I am pleased to see this story proceeding. I am sorry about the problems that you have had with the site. I look forward to Harry easing his hormonal backup and doing something truly appropriate to Scrimgour. Thanks for writing. W.
Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Wednesday 11th April 2007 5:41am for Chapter 5
Nice chapter. I admit to being a little curious to know what Voldie and Scrimgeour were up to during the year of incarceration.
Nice to see the fenses being mended. Ron/Luna is a bit jaring; he would have to mature a lot to get along with her.
Nice to see an update. Looking forward to more.
Tom A.
Treck posted a comment on Wednesday 11th April 2007 5:08am for Chapter 5
I do hope that you have some plan to ruin Sumsuckers day.
Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Tuesday 10th April 2007 11:12pm for Chapter 5
Great section, and going to be interesting to see what happens with the gang now, and how things might go to get Harry back to England, and the final battle when he gets there, with both Tom and the Ministry, along with his feelings for the ladies around him.
morriganscrow posted a comment on Tuesday 10th April 2007 10:54pm for Chapter 5
Excellent story!
Paranoid!Harry is always fun as are the uninhibited girls.
More please.
Lionsgate posted a comment on Tuesday 10th April 2007 10:37pm for Chapter 5
ok i think : now put some hhr romance in it and i will become a happy camper .... ( and don't let us wait another year pls ) ...
DrT posted a comment on Tuesday 10th April 2007 10:30pm for Chapter 5
Excellent! So, this is at least the third story set near dear old Mansfield. (Although supposedly set in another dimension, my story Ynunlle has the crew traveling from Waverly NY to Mansfield via East Smithfield. Athens and Chemung NY appear in 'To the Rescue PtII', and the Clan valley would be just a bit further west of your setting, and of course Carantouan was named after Mansfield's 'indian name', although it was set further east.
"T"
MU of Pa/Class of 1980
Kinsfire replied:
I was pretty sure you knew the area - your references to Binghamton in a couple stories were too spot-on for someone who only has a passing knowledge.
I grew up in the Finger Lakes, smack between Seneca and Cayuga Lakes. Summer vacation often involved going to Wellsboro and environs for a week or so, so I know exactly where they are. *laugh*
The Resident posted a comment on Tuesday 10th April 2007 9:24pm for Chapter 5
If I'd been in the same position, I'd have been in a shower of the same description. All in all, a nice 'reconciliation' piece. Not back to where they were, but that can never be anyway. Now all I have to do is wait for the next chapter. You have the hard part... you have to write it. Keep up the great work. I'll be waiting.
trall541 posted a comment on Tuesday 10th April 2007 8:07pm for Chapter 5
great story...cant wait for the next chapter...
redjacobson posted a comment on Tuesday 10th April 2007 4:51pm for Chapter 5
interesting; and i'm glad to see you working on this one again.
red
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Tuesday 10th April 2007 4:08pm for Chapter 5
That's a very strong personal moral code and impressive self-control. It will be interesting to see what, if anything, develops between him and Hermione as it looks like the potential is most definitely still there.
It's going to be interesting to see how he deals with his return to England and with Scrimgeour.
Charles Slone posted a comment on Tuesday 10th April 2007 4:07pm for Chapter 5
well that is a intresting story don't know how i skiped it before?
John Fitzgerald posted a comment on Tuesday 10th April 2007 2:39pm for Chapter 5
I hope that you will update again soon. thanks.
BJH posted a comment on Tuesday 10th April 2007 2:06pm for Chapter 5
Also, and another reason for Harry to question the authenticity of these people is the fact that Scrimgeour is still Minister and still weilds the power of the government and yet they tell Harry that the Ministry will fix his problems with the Muggle law and he should go on home? If I were Harry I wouldn't be rushing back to England any time soon.
BJH again
BJH posted a comment on Tuesday 10th April 2007 2:01pm for Chapter 5
Interesting that Harry is so easily convinced that he was wrong about them and no even once suspected that the reason that they are acting so differently from the past is that they are different people. Rufus finds out about the meeting and substitutes his people in polyjuice or glamours for the original people in order to gain his cooperation. The conversation at the cafe is all staged and Harry is the audience.
BJH
Ken Warner posted a comment on Tuesday 10th April 2007 1:36pm for Chapter 5
wow - don't really know how to say much else except thanks for the double chapters
lots to take in there - and the major growth spurts in the characters are excellent but will take some getting used to.
warm regards
Patches posted a comment on Sunday 15th April 2007 8:45pm for Chapter 5