Nytefyre posted a comment on Thursday 7th March 2013 12:58am for Chapter 5

I like the way this started and how it's been slowly unwinding. Wish there was more..

Thanks for posting.

FeNo posted a comment on Saturday 17th March 2012 7:50pm for Chapter 5

A "betrayed" story with a nice little twist in the middle. I guess it's totally understandable that he would not give himself up to those Aurors at Privet Drive willingly but his lack of resistance just because he didn't have it in it to "kill" that Auror is somewhat illogical... he could at least have tried something like apparating away or blasting a hole through the walls or such...

But maybe it's the same as with the other thigns that happen... he isn't really evil or even hateful after his year at the Az... just disillusioned, frustrated and unbelieveably lonely. So when presented with the possibility that his friends might not have been how he imagined them to be - his enemies, happy with his lot in life and laughing about him being in hell but rather concerned and frightened for him, searching frantically after hints where he might be and ultimately killing off horcruxes to ease his quest, he takes it and opens up again just like in old times.

I liked the Giles hoax/prank and it was nice how you turned it against him.

The end of chapter 5 was a little bit abrupt, i take it there is still something planned to happen? A mindless fuck would not have been a great ending, but maybe a slow and careful romance would give a nice counterpoint for the despair and pain in which all that begun.

Charles Newton posted a comment on Friday 4th February 2011 12:31am for Chapter 5

I haven't figured out Hermione yet. Did she and Ron have a thing that ended amicably, and she has some residual feelings for Harry; did she love him and his disappearance make her realize it, as Gin came to realize how she truly felt about Neville and Luna....??

C'mon, already!!! I gots ta know!!!!

tw posted a comment on Sunday 21st February 2010 11:04pm for Chapter 5

good story...need an update whenever the muse strikes you. :)

Charles Newton posted a comment on Wednesday 20th January 2010 10:04pm for Chapter 5

Yoooooo Hooooooo!!! Can ya hear me?
Please, please, PLEASE come back to this and do some more chapters; you stopped as it was really getting intense!

noylj posted a comment on Thursday 14th May 2009 7:22pm for Chapter 5

Need more chappies. It is wiefd though to have Luna and Ginny cheapening their love for a shag.
Please post more.

huskerfan posted a comment on Saturday 28th March 2009 1:07pm for Chapter 5

This is a really good story, are you going to continue on with it?

gadriam posted a comment on Sunday 1st March 2009 8:21am for Chapter 5

Here's me just pointing out, once again, that you make some brilliant stories. When the creative juices start flowing again, please do pay some attention to this one.
Thanks

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kjd posted a comment on Tuesday 21st October 2008 10:21am for Chapter 5

interesting start, ill keep an eye on your updates of this story

LightIce posted a comment on Monday 1st September 2008 11:44am for Chapter 5

Great story so far

Brad1 posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd June 2008 8:18am for Chapter 5

ohh poor harry he's doing it to himself again love the story i can see scrimbutt doing that to him and have his own personal auror's beating on harry to break him! keep up the awesome writing!

cwejr posted a comment on Friday 30th May 2008 2:45am for Chapter 5

I need to stop reading these incomplete stories---the frustration factor is too high. I get royally wrapped up in the story, then I run out of road...right into a brick wall. Another great story that I'm waiting for chapters. Why does it seem like the best stories are always 'works-in-progress'? I love your stories! They even interfere with my other obsession, radio, and that takes a lot.

Please, don't ever stop writing. It's like a whole 'nother real world.

Prongs1977 posted a comment on Tuesday 8th April 2008 1:41pm for Chapter 5

Can't wait for more, this is just getting good!

silentjackal posted a comment on Tuesday 1st April 2008 12:26am for Chapter 5

I would love to see an update of this one. Very well written and believable

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Friday 14th March 2008 6:32pm for Chapter 5

You should definetly update this. It's so interesting. No pairing also is interesting for the future prospects of this story.

bobman posted a comment on Saturday 26th January 2008 3:22pm for Chapter 5

Finally, a believable azkaban!harry fic. Most of them have everyone and there dog betraying Harry for no reason whatsoever, whereas this one, he was just made to believe that. Very well done, and hopefully, this story will be continued soon.

dennisud posted a comment on Thursday 6th December 2007 2:44pm for Chapter 5

I like the drama, though harry as an uber-emo is a bit much. And your tendency to through the Multi-girl and sex with harry card is at times fun but a bit like being beaten over the head with.
You have so far as i have read a great sence oif storytelling, but Sex is not Love and though eventually in most of your finished stories they DO love him whichever girl or girls he's involved with, I think the 'sex' card needs to be dealt with later on in the story and with more development in the relationship or ships as it goes.

Hope that helps a bit!

dennisud

Cynthia1850 posted a comment on Monday 7th May 2007 2:41am for Chapter 5

This is really interesting. You didn't just make Harry trust again in the second chapter like so many do. I'm glad he is also holding back on the girls until he can think better. Great story so far.

Terry Swain posted a comment on Sunday 29th April 2007 3:05am for Chapter 5

Great chapter. :)

spedclass101 posted a comment on Thursday 19th April 2007 8:58am for Chapter 5

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!