Dark Clouds
Chapter 3
By Kinsfire
Reviews
fopalup posted a comment on Saturday 28th January 2006 2:33pm for Chapter 3
Well, I for one hope you come back to this story soon. There are very few good azkaban stories and I think this could be a good one. I like how you have held on to Harry's ideals even if he is bent on revenge. I also hope he gets to ring Scrimgeour's neck.
jmcqk6 posted a comment on Thursday 26th January 2006 5:29am for Chapter 3
rather interesting story you have here. definately looking forward to reading more.
TheHard posted a comment on Monday 23rd January 2006 3:30am for Chapter 3
Hi!
Good story, great start... you're going to continue soon?
Thanks for sharing :)
Jasmine posted a comment on Thursday 19th January 2006 4:22am for Chapter 3
This is really good! Not only is the action and dialog interesting but Harry's thoughts are too. (Typially things like that bore me but not the way you write it. I absolutely can't wait for more!!
hedwig_edwiges posted a comment on Saturday 7th January 2006 8:03am for Chapter 3
interesting but a bit confusing. Harry is angry or not, after all? Even if he doesn't want to kill someone innocent, he wouldn't just let himself get caught, right? I would like to see where you take this but right now "Ties of Blood" are my priority in reading.
jonnyb posted a comment on Friday 6th January 2006 1:00am for Chapter 3
Interesting story. One problem being that the punishment system in this country hasn't included the death penalty since the 60s, so that might need to be changed a little bit.
EricThorsen posted a comment on Wednesday 4th January 2006 10:40am for Chapter 3
Want More... Want More Now! Seriously though, one of the more interesting HBP stories I've read, which, when you consider I hated HBP, is saying something.
pandora5002002 posted a comment on Thursday 29th December 2005 12:48am for Chapter 3
Hi,
I love this one. It is a unique one of the "Harry in Azkaban" plot. Please update asap
Maxennce posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 5:50pm for Chapter 3
Jesus, just what the hell was happeneing, has the wizarding world gone to hell in a handbasket. Keep up the great work, really looking forward to your next chapter and just what you have planned for your next chapter and cynical Harry
Cheers
Max
James Benfield posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 1:31am for Chapter 3
Waiting eagerly for the next chapter!
James
helva2260 posted a comment on Saturday 3rd December 2005 10:17pm for Chapter 3
Um, just a minor thing, but when Scrimgeour told Harry that the Muggles had given him the death penalty, it cannot have been true, since the UK abolished the death penalty sometime in the 1960s(-ish).
Hopefully, I'm worrying about nothing and this was just Scrimgeour attempting to intimidate Harry. However I'm pretty sure that even as someone who has only spent summers in the muggle world since his eleventh birthday, he'd still know that, which means he should have noticed Scrimgeour was lying.
Ah well! I rather like feral!Harry, though I'm not quite convinced (yet!) that he'd get so bad in such a short space of time. It's a great idea though, so keep up the good work!
NuvaChaos posted a comment on Wednesday 30th November 2005 4:41am for Chapter 3
i like it, i hope you're going to update again sometime
Jimbocous posted a comment on Friday 25th November 2005 9:13am for Chapter 3
Interesting start. Hope you'll keep up with it. Thanks
slashslut posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd November 2005 1:44am for Chapter 3
loving it! update ASAP!!!!!
john menefee posted a comment on Sunday 30th October 2005 9:44am for Chapter 3
where in the hell is this story going? this is really good and i seriously hope your going to continue to work on this story.
Zero Blitz posted a comment on Thursday 27th October 2005 1:10am for Chapter 3
This seems alright so far. Hurry up and update!
Manatheron posted a comment on Thursday 20th October 2005 2:40am for Chapter 3
interesting start... I can only assume that at some point scrimgour is going to be accused of making up charges and throwing an innocent man in prision, and then harry will most likely be released as he's already served whatever time he was going to get before hand... I'm actually looking foreward to the next chapter, just to see what happens after.
Erin posted a comment on Monday 17th October 2005 10:10pm for Chapter 3
Nice story so far looking forward to reading some more.
dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Sunday 2nd October 2005 10:59pm for Chapter 3
Nice work. I'm still not positive what's going on tho'.
Jay-F posted a comment on Tuesday 31st January 2006 8:06am for Chapter 3