Dark Clouds
Chapter 3
By Kinsfire
Reviews
Paul Blay posted a comment on Sunday 21st February 2010 6:28am for Chapter 3
"The Muggles gave you the death penalty"
Either, a) he's lying, b) you don't know that the United Kingdom doesn't have the death penalty.
mashimaromadness posted a comment on Monday 10th March 2008 4:47pm for Chapter 3
Ok,I'm confused and hope to gain some clarity in the next chapter. I'm glad to know what his supposed crime was, though. Other than that I'm suspending judgement until I figure out what's going on.
spedclass101 posted a comment on Thursday 19th April 2007 8:32am for Chapter 3
Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!
KyuubiNaru posted a comment on Sunday 30th July 2006 9:44pm for Chapter 3
this is such a sad story...not bad but, crying sad...
veela504 posted a comment on Sunday 30th July 2006 12:12pm for Chapter 3
I love it! More please! Can I get notices at to when you update?
Debby
veela504@yahoo.com
CaptainG posted a comment on Wednesday 26th July 2006 7:16pm for Chapter 3
You need to update this sometime. It's easily your most 'deep' story - not that i don't like them but almost all your other stories involve Harru deciding he's in love with a few girls and then them declaring they love him. This is a great story and needs to be continued. please?
Kinsfire replied:
You'll be happy to know, then, that the chapter is being looked at by my betas. At least one of them made some suggestions in earlier chapters, so I will likely update all FOUR of them at the same time. (The main story won't change - just certain things to tighten up his reactions.)
Nick5 posted a comment on Thursday 20th July 2006 6:43am for Chapter 3
Well... I see someone's going to be needing therapy very soon, and I'm entirely sure that it's Harry who is going to be needing it. Very nice.
Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Saturday 24th June 2006 4:26am for Chapter 3
I really, really want to know what on earth is going on. Fantastic chapter. I love that Harry chose not to hurt them further in the end. Poor boy. More please.
Saurons-bane posted a comment on Thursday 22nd June 2006 1:55am for Chapter 3
An excellent story hopping it gets updated soon. A very nice work.
Muirnin Cocan posted a comment on Saturday 10th June 2006 12:45pm for Chapter 3
You know, I love stories like this... pissed off Harry...
Gotta finish this...
Oh and I added all of your stories url's to my forum (not that anyone goes there mind you) but that way the word is out there so that you get noticed more... *grin*
Well take care, talk to you later... hope to here from you soon... I should probably get the kids in soon... but it's so nice and quiet...
As Always,
Muirnin - who's cuddled up in the chair with Moony
http://muirnin.life-less-ordinary.com/index.php
ridmania posted a comment on Thursday 8th June 2006 6:01pm for Chapter 3
good so far but looks as if harry si weak hope he kills that auror please update ssoon
Simon Parsons posted a comment on Tuesday 30th May 2006 9:56am for Chapter 3
Ok, so you have built the suspense and left us hanging! This could be one of the best Azkaban!Harry stories out there if you keep it going the way it is, especially if you can resist the temptation for a fluffy happy ending where Harry forgives everyone and they live happily ever after. So, hey, please don't leave us all dangling!
Cuda posted a comment on Thursday 25th May 2006 11:26pm for Chapter 3
Wow...Not quite sure what I think about this yet, but I look forward to see where you're going. I do have one favor to ask though, if Hermione is fucking Ron I don't want to know about it, because for some reason-and I have no doubt you'll find this weird-it hurts me a little when she's not with Harry. But other than that, I hope that you update this soon.
Keep up the great work!
mercutioh posted a comment on Thursday 4th May 2006 5:44pm for Chapter 3
wow a definately different road than what I would imagine for young Haarry but as usual a gripping read. I find myself liking your versions of Harry extremely well across the stories even if it does seem a bit off canon, but then that's the whole point of fan fic. Just wanted to post a little something to tell you that your work is highly entertaining and thought provoking and I for one will keep reading it wherever I can find it.
HermioneGreen posted a comment on Sunday 9th April 2006 2:53pm for Chapter 3
When do you plan on continuing this fic? It is very interesting that the aurors that caught up eith Harry, seem to have no clue as to what he went through in Azkaban.
jake m posted a comment on Friday 24th March 2006 4:08pm for Chapter 3
YOU MUST UPDATE THIS
ThomasWatts posted a comment on Saturday 18th March 2006 11:48pm for Chapter 3
Your Harry has always been an f'n ass-basket. If he took three seconds to let Hermione say something, he may have found he still had friends, no matter what her 'fuck buddy' thinks. Neither Ron, nor Hermione have ever completely abandoned Harry in any of the books.
Harry doesn't know, that perhaps, he wasn't allowed visitors. Or perhaps, any defense built up by Hermione, or others, was thrown out for petty reasons.
He doesn't deserve friends because, right now, he is truely being a grade A asshat.
Kinsfire replied:
You're welcome to your opinion, and are cordially invited to not read any further when I get around to updating it again, since you will undoubtedly not like the direction this will go in.
jake m posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 10:27pm for Chapter 3
where the hell is the rest this is suspensful you know !!!!!
its been weeks wheres the rest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(eager fan)
jake m posted a comment on Saturday 4th March 2006 12:26pm for Chapter 3
dude that was awsome i thin kone of the best uhv done but where is the rest plz write thats awsome write more!
Georgia posted a comment on Monday 14th June 2010 7:06pm for Chapter 3