Burning Day
The Beginning of the End
By Kinsfire
Reviews
Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Wednesday 1st November 2006 6:55pm for The Beginning of the End
Well shit! This has got to be the absolutely dumbest s.o.b. on the planet. Definite insane wanker, if it wasn't your writing this Keith, I'd figure it take Harry about 30 seconds to squah this twerp and get back to his life, but I figure there will be much more to it then that.
Ron posted a comment on Wednesday 1st November 2006 6:43pm for The Beginning of the End
OOOOOHhhhhhhh, I like this so far, Keith! Can't wait to see more of it.
MononWalker posted a comment on Wednesday 1st November 2006 6:28pm for The Beginning of the End
Excellent start, Keith.
A lot is going on in this chapter. You go though all the setup of everyone relaxing around the island then throw us all into the deep end of the pool.
I know story-wise it's been 5 years, but the changes to Severus still seemed a bit abrupt (especially since you just posted the final chapters of LAPFTA the other day). Still, it's interesting to see him as a human being.
I have my suspicions as to who the new Dark Lord Basileus is, but I'll hold my opinion for now (although you may have already given it away).
I'm assuming you'll be posting every day during the month of November. Looking forward to seeing all that you do.
Nightwing510 posted a comment on Wednesday 1st November 2006 6:14pm for The Beginning of the End
I enjoye reading your story. I liked the way you had Harry married & had him a Father.
freakyfinger posted a comment on Wednesday 1st November 2006 6:01pm for The Beginning of the End
Oh, that's really cruel. Sending the father a finger off the child's hand? eww
Robert Klemic posted a comment on Wednesday 1st November 2006 5:18pm for The Beginning of the End
Oh my. What an impressive start.
RoseKelly1021 posted a comment on Wednesday 1st November 2006 5:16pm for The Beginning of the End
Kins,
I'm going to be doing the word game until I figure it out. I mean the Tom M. Riddle to Lord Voldie so Lord Basileus to ... I will be working on it though. Nice start but I got to say the villian is really stupid. *lol* Could've kidnapped anyone but a child and lived to see next week. Good job. More soon.
Kelly
Cky Raes posted a comment on Wednesday 1st November 2006 5:11pm for The Beginning of the End
Please update soon! I'll will die of withdrawal if you don't!
Alexis posted a comment on Wednesday 1st November 2006 4:59pm for The Beginning of the End
Yay!!! Looks like Nanowrimo 2006 is starting with a bang! :) Great chapter Keith! I like the idea and I can't wait to see how you drag it out (cause Harry can't make him go poof right away, then the story would be too short... *laugh*) Can't wait for more!
merf425 posted a comment on Wednesday 1st November 2006 7:00pm for The Beginning of the End