Arvin Betancourt posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 12:38am for The Beginning of the End

good one! please more!

loralee posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 12:31am for The Beginning of the End

yay, very nice

mike bates posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 12:25am for The Beginning of the End

very nice story kinfire. i still hope to wonder what the real name of this new 'Dark Lord' is for them to come up with the name Basileus

DJ Rodriguez posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 12:24am for The Beginning of the End

*Growls* When I get my hands on this 'Lord', he better have a ticket to Hell because that's where I'm sending him, First-class!! Harry, do what you have to in order to save your daughter! I hope that there is a potion or something that will restore her finger. Bastard D.L. wannabe!! I WANT TO CHOP HIM UP INTO LITTLE PIECES AND THROW THEM IN THE SALTEST SEA WATER!!!! A harm that befalls a child... means instant death.

DrT posted a comment on Wednesday 1st November 2006 11:58pm for The Beginning of the End

Lord Basileus? Isn't calling oneself 'Lord King' (classical Greek) or 'Lord War Chief' (Linear B) rather pretentious? Of course, I guess most Dark Lord wannabes tend in that direction.

"T"

Kinsfire replied:

Thank you!   I knew at least one of my readers would get this!   Mind you, the source I found said that it could also mean 'Emperor'.

Which might give a clue as to who the Dark Idiot is...

PerfesserN posted a comment on Wednesday 1st November 2006 10:55pm for The Beginning of the End

No good deed goes unpunished indeed. I hope the threefold rule comes into play here. An evocative return to this version of Harry's life - poor guy can't seem to get a break. "With great power comes. . ." we all know the rest. Now lets kick some arse noir !

UdderPD posted a comment on Wednesday 1st November 2006 10:54pm for The Beginning of the End

A bit early to really know but a good start.

Thank you for the confession of minor larceny (I really don't mind)

TTFN UdderPD

KLGreen posted a comment on Wednesday 1st November 2006 10:44pm for The Beginning of the End

great start

Stygius posted a comment on Wednesday 1st November 2006 10:05pm for The Beginning of the End

nice... but if this Basileus dude ends up alive after this encounted i am going to be greatly disappointed in this story and Harry.

to cut of an innocent child's finger.

i am surprised that harry has been as civil as he was. I would of just expected him to apparate into Diagion Alley, and challenge Barileus to come out.

I look forward to some serious ass-kicking. Love to see some kind of brutal payback from Harry.

Stygius posted a comment on Wednesday 1st November 2006 10:00pm for The Beginning of the End

nice beginning. i hate what happened to Lorelei. I can't wait to see BASTARD basileus get his. another SNAKE. well this shall be interesting.

i won't mind seeing Basileus cut into tiny pieces.

update soon.

redjacobson posted a comment on Wednesday 1st November 2006 9:28pm for The Beginning of the End

oh boy! this is gonna get sticky! Excellent start; and I am really most sincerely jealous of how fast you got this written. I have just barely decided on what story I'm going to tell; and you have this already out there? Oy!

red

Kinsfire replied:

I had a slight jump on you - someone suggested a sequel to me, which sounded so good for the NaNoWriMo that I needed to finish Like a Phoenix first.

So I've actually been working with this plot for about two weeks now, just waiting for yesterday.   The hard part is actually writing the bridges between the important parts that I want to touch.

Mind you, if this works the way I want it to, this story will be finished by November 15th, and be at least 50,000 words. I'm actually hoping to do TWO stories for NaNoWriMo this year.

I must be insane...

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Wednesday 1st November 2006 9:27pm for The Beginning of the End

Oh, my. It sounds like that dark idiot really has no idea what he's getting into; either that or he's got a lot more power than Tom had. Either way it's going to get rather interesting.

*chuckle* Now, if this was a real western, toward the end of this chapter is where "Bugler, sound 'Boots & Saddles'!" would be the command. As 'tis, it's going to be an "interesting" development of the correlation of forces.

jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Wednesday 1st November 2006 9:20pm for The Beginning of the End

OUTSTANDING BEGINING!!!! I absolutely hate this Lord Basileus jerk already, I mean to harm a perfectly innocent child by removing on of there fingers. I hope Harry and his wives and Severus and Albus remove his genatalia with a rusty spoon after they've all urinated on it and then proceed to remove his eyes with the same spoon before ultimatly killing him. Anyways do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)

Marie2 posted a comment on Wednesday 1st November 2006 9:09pm for The Beginning of the End

interesting start you have me hooked More please and soon

Treck posted a comment on Wednesday 1st November 2006 8:38pm for The Beginning of the End

BRAVO!!!

Ian Morgan posted a comment on Wednesday 1st November 2006 8:29pm for The Beginning of the End

great chapter
Please keep the chapters comming

Yenom posted a comment on Wednesday 1st November 2006 8:18pm for The Beginning of the End

Oh wow someone is the dumbest Dark Lord to ever live, though he must have a good few ward breakers to get into the Lovegood Home. Not to mention an inside man to kill Fudge and Know Harry's Daughter was at her grand fathers... though they were more then likely seen walking around town.

The finger I'm going to assume was middle, ring, or pointer as you didn't mention which it was and the thumb and pinky would stand out. Though it could have been fake as they didn't check... which if that was true Harry might not kill him slowly, so I look forward to find out which it is.

Anyway wonderful work, makes you drool for the next chapter already so you can see Harry tear the Dark wanabe and his troops apart. Not to mention seeing your Snape use some of his own spell right along side him, whom is surprisingly likeable... if a little sappy with Harry at times. =) So again great work, and thanks for sharing it with all of us.

Bob Swagger posted a comment on Wednesday 1st November 2006 8:07pm for The Beginning of the End

Angsty. His childs finger. Yikes. Well hopefully he flexes some magical prowess, wipes the floor with the guy, and the rest of the story is about the fun making up and celebrating. Given that this is fiction however, its never going to happen. Bring on the drama!

Voldemort is Dead posted a comment on Wednesday 1st November 2006 8:06pm for The Beginning of the End

Very good!

Amamama posted a comment on Wednesday 1st November 2006 7:19pm for The Beginning of the End

Interesting start! I do second Severus' closing line... SO, five years in paradise, and "Lord Basileus" enters. Some creatures are just too stupid for their own good. You just don't touch the child of the most powerful wizard if you want to live. I doubt this will be pretty, but most probably it will be fun to read.

Thanks!