EricThorsen posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 5:40am for The Beginning of the End

I agree with Snape... anyone who pisses off someone who the goblins consider their friend needs a current will... except by the time Harry's friends are finishec with them, their heirs won't get anything.

Alorkin posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 5:32am for The Beginning of the End

As always, a wonderful lead-in chapter. It looks to me that Draco is up to his old tricks. I wonder if Fudge let him bribe his way back into respectibility, or if he found another way. Of all the characters, Draco is the only one with definate ties to Voldy, that seemed to have escaped unscathed. Narcissa would surely have been sent to Azkaban, but likely enough money in the right hands would ensure her 'early release'.
Draco is also the one left from the old guard, who possesses the background of cruelty to mutilate a child. I for one, hope to see Harry tear him a new asshole...from the inside out! (I have a daughter.)
I see the Prophet is again the ministry's mouthpiece. I wonder if it's time for Harry to take a moe active role in the wizarding press. If he was to buy the paper, or at least a controlling interest in it, he could force some rather seriously needed changes. Ok, nuff sed.
As always, I look forward to the next chapter of 'Burning day. Alorkin

IceBlades posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 5:08am for The Beginning of the End

this looks like its going to be a fun story

azureguy86 posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 4:48am for The Beginning of the End

Good story keep it coming, Harry as a badass dad is such a good character.

Donald Deutsch posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 3:39am for The Beginning of the End

Awesome work so far Keith, keep up the good work as usual.

Adam posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 3:18am for The Beginning of the End

Oh boy and so it begins again. this time though Harry already has allies, so he isnt having to start from stratch.

bit cliche sending a finger, but hey good or original dark lords are hard to find I guess :)

Good chapter, be fun seeing where this goes.

morriganscrow posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 2:58am for The Beginning of the End

I think "Lord Basileus" just made a giant boo-boo.
How stupid do you have to be to kidnap and mutilate the daughter of the Wizard and Witches who destroyed Voldie and his mangey pack of lickspittles?
This is going to be a fun story and I'm all agog to read the next chapter. Please update soon.

vheritas@aapt.net.au

Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 2:45am for The Beginning of the End

You don't waste any time, do you. Right into the plot! Good job. Get that child rescued right away.

Nice start. Looking forward to the rest.

And gee, you wrote more than twice as many words your first NaNoWriMo day than I did.

Tom A.

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 2:28am for The Beginning of the End

Three guesses who Lord Basilieus is. However, he is facing several Major Problems:

1. Albus Dumbledore is *fully* behind Harry.
2. Severus Snape is *fully* behind Harry.
3. The Ministry (via Percy) is actually *mostly* behind Harry. (I assume I don't have to remind you who is likely *still* running Magical Law Enforcement.)
4. Harry still has his wives, now backed by *all* of the Weasleys (except the missing Bill and Charlie) in his corner.
5. Last, but not least, Ragnok (and thus the entirety of the Goblin Confederation) is in his corner.

Welcome surprises:

1. Percy Weasley. He's stopped being a prat, *and* he also had the sense to marry DeLuscious Daphne Greengrass (unless she's married to Ron). That needs to be cleared up.

2. Molly Weasley. She is *not* as quick to overreact, and she actually remembers her manners (notice her *lack* of reaction to all the bare witch-flesh on Black Island, and Daphne being topless didn't faze her, either).

3. Severus Snape. While he is no longer teaching at Hogwarts, he *does* still teach Potions. He's also a MUCH more relaxerd person than he has been.

Gwyn Raven posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 2:21am for The Beginning of the End

Oh, you're evil!

So how many kids does Harry have at this point? If Pansy's on her second pregnancy that would be at least the fifth, and only if none of the others had any more after their first, which I can't imagine to be the case :)

Write more soon!

imakeeper posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 2:13am for The Beginning of the End

lol that was awesome

Manatheron posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 2:05am for The Beginning of the End

{snicker}

I can't help but review this one, I don't know who you have lined up for the new 'dork Lord' but it's going to be fun watching him get shredded.

mjc posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 2:01am for The Beginning of the End

Been watching Mafia movies again, Keith?

ian mcfarland posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 1:40am for The Beginning of the End

I liked the first story if this one is as good you are at the same level as bodmin but can you finish some of your other storys first

Roberta Johnson posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 1:26am for The Beginning of the End

OoooH! Wow, what a start. There's nothing like a Dark Lord Wannabe with a death wish!

Roberta Johnson posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 1:26am for The Beginning of the End

OoooH! Wow, what a start. There's nothing like a Dark Lord Wannabe with a deah wish!

Davideg posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 1:25am for The Beginning of the End

o that was fantastic i cant wait for your next chapter so please update agin a.s.a.p.

c3markh posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 1:23am for The Beginning of the End

Love the new story. Thanks for writing.

IssaBissa posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 1:18am for The Beginning of the End

A very inturging start to the story!!!! I loved it as always!!! I can't wait for the new chapter!!! Keep up the great work!!!

(deleted) posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 12:40am for The Beginning of the End

pretty cool. just wish you hadnt made it five years into the future. i really liked the previouse story. i've just always felt that five years is a HUGE plot gap. but i will keep reading in the hopes that you will be able to fill it in nicely