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Noble Korhedron posted a comment on Sunday 16th July 2017 4:05pm for Going Out With a Different Type of Bang

Great story; wish there was more…

karry299 posted a comment on Saturday 19th November 2016 8:50am for Going Out With a Different Type of Bang

This....is unreadable. Just a random stream of consciousness with barely any coherent plot.

MonCappy posted a comment on Thursday 26th November 2015 2:38am for Going Out With a Different Type of Bang

I find amusing that Ron is one of the good Weasleys in this story. Usually, with betrayal plotlines he is among the villains.

hubris posted a comment on Saturday 3rd January 2015 9:24pm for Going Out With a Different Type of Bang

Don't know how I missed this one. A very enjoyable read.

Patches posted a comment on Friday 22nd August 2014 7:49am for Going Out With a Different Type of Bang

This is a great ending. Of course Dumbledore was insane but he was the only one that didn't know it. I'm surprised at the assumptions Dumbledore made at the meeting in Nice. He really thought Percy was behind him 100%. Of course Percy had figured out that Dumbledore was wrong in the long run. I'm glad that the Weasley boys rose above the ways of their parents and sister. Harry finally got the family he wanted all along. I look forward to more stories from you. Thanks for writing. pms

Noble Korhedron posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd June 2014 6:51pm for Going Out With a Different Type of Bang

Wish you'd add more, but I doubt it. WAAAAH! *throws tantrum*

chrwain01 posted a comment on Friday 3rd May 2013 9:33am for Going Out With a Different Type of Bang

Thanks, I enjoyed this. Not so much your characterisaton of Tonks but the broader story certainly.

One scene I definitely felt was missing was the one where Heidi took Hermione, Cho and Harry out to a club in Paris. Based on your writeup of Munich I think that might have been a lot of fun.

Other than that a great fun fast paced frolic, thanks for sharing.

Nytefyre posted a comment on Saturday 9th March 2013 2:43am for Going Out With a Different Type of Bang

Nicely paced and well plotted. This was a fun story to read... one that I couldn't stop reading.

Thanks for posting.

sweetie_v2003 posted a comment on Thursday 14th February 2013 5:39pm for Going Out With a Different Type of Bang

I FOUND THIS STORY FUN AN DIFFERENT. THANKS

4rm36uy posted a comment on Monday 11th February 2013 6:00pm for Going Out With a Different Type of Bang

Nearly died laughing when I read the name of the new MLE Director. This was my second time reading it and only just caught it.

Keep up the great material.

Matt

DAMNED posted a comment on Tuesday 30th October 2012 2:20pm for Going Out With a Different Type of Bang

GOOD STORY I LIKE HOW IT TURNED OUT.

loretta537 posted a comment on Monday 29th October 2012 3:08pm for Going Out With a Different Type of Bang

this was a great story

keichan2 posted a comment on Tuesday 24th July 2012 1:55pm for Going Out With a Different Type of Bang

This was a very good story! I really liked reading it! Thanks for sharing!

Arkarian23 posted a comment on Monday 2nd July 2012 3:58am for Going Out With a Different Type of Bang

definitely enjoyed reading thsi fic. I expected lemons from the way the story was portrayed but that's ok.

valdiusmacto posted a comment on Sunday 3rd June 2012 10:36pm for Going Out With a Different Type of Bang

As seems to be a pattern with me reading your work...I like this in pure spite of my normal dislike for Betrayal fics. I also normally have a fairly strong dislike for large numbers of OC's. You managed to make a well developed, well crafted story. With well crafted OC's to boot.

Strangely the greatest criticism I have with the story is actually the lack of smut. Normally I'm not a big fan of much if any being in a good story. It tends to ruin otherwise excellent tales by changing the focus of both the writer and the reader. In this case however you managed to develop the characters in such a way, without detracting from the characters themselves or the story, as to make it a logical conclusion. It actually felt as if the story was *missing* something. Strange. Perhaps I have stumbled on to why women seem to find value in romance novels? Disturbing thought that. I better go watch something get blown up.

Anyway, another good read!

wendy1 posted a comment on Wednesday 25th April 2012 12:57pm for Going Out With a Different Type of Bang

Great story! Thanks so much for writing

FeNo posted a comment on Sunday 18th March 2012 9:46pm for Going Out With a Different Type of Bang

I'm everytime astonished how normal and unmentionable usual you make your favorite polyamorous pairings seem. And therefore i cannot find anything wrong in this constellations other than pity the boys at Hogwarts that won't get any girlfriend because of this massive hoarding and maybe sometimes the short timetable you give them to fall in deep, neverending love or at least from confess these old and deeply buried feelings until they realize their relief... It's somewhat straining my traditional "suspension of disbelief" when they make something that complex work in mere months time and will be happily ever after, but then... it's just words and i can very well imagine they took a handful of years instead of weeks or months when it will make me happy...

But enough of this generalities and on to this - once again - exquisite tale of betrayal and forgiveness. Epic, simply epic. I enjoy to see how Tom Riddle was losing all importance once Harry had found his way and slipped off Dumbledore's leash. The idea that the famous Rowling prophecy were a fake and stemmed from the saga of Beowulf is ingenious in my book and the other one is blissfully short and pregnant, many another author would have tortured us with a complicated array of riddles and vagaries of twenty lines horribly rhimed poem or somesuch while all the time it would have boiled down to "Riddle goes down, but beware... Dumbledore is getting unhinged and will use this chance to go Dark!"

Your characters were pleasantly thought out and showed adepth not really found in the original works this story is based on... Ron's change could never have happened in the original book six just because.... the characters there DID NOT change. Or only when needed to fulfil her shipping preferences (Ginny)... The way Cho has worked on her faults from fifth year e.g. is also above everything she-who-holds-the-rights could not have managed. And it was GOOD. Just like Kaatje and Heidi the two OCs moving much of the story along during its first half. Okay, some aspects might be called "sueish", but i'm convinced that most of those characters is convincing and could be found in real life persons without much effort (other than magical powers of course :P)

And now for something completelly different and the one unpleasant thing ... the rise and fall of Albus the First, Dark Overlord of the realms of Britain and Ireland and his willing helpers... I'm meanwhile used that both Ginny and Molly lend themselves to very negative interpretations of their motives and deeds. Seeing here all the other heroes of the Order i secretly adore and worship in my private "fanon" happily joining the wagon and doing evil!Albusses decrees is a bit hurting, but for most of them you've shown good reasons and motives... Minerva or Remus e.g. Shack and Arthur and Tonks are a bit in a grey zone as they are only shown zealous but not really looked into in regards to the why and how it came so far they did never doubt nor ask for reasons for What Albus is doing there before their own eyes... at the very latest doing an Imperius on Hermione JUST to get a letter to influence Harry to their plans would have been a wake up call ot any decent person and i'm having some problems with seeing them not as such, some problems (e.g. why neither Remus nor Tonks' Family searched contact to Harry for his 10 year exile befóre book 1)

Of course Albus actions are believeable, nobody is likely to realize when he turns criminal or insane. It's just so sad seeing his life's work go down the sewer so fast and utterly... whereas i don't have any sympathy for canon!Dumbledore for exactly the reasons you've taken and enlarged for your story, i still have a certain kind of respect for his underlying values and the deep grief we were introduced to with book 7. But then being shaken in his core beliefs by having involuntarily killed his baby sister during a fight about what the greater good entails is no good reason to hemper any other persons struggle with his own beliefs and motivations and to railroad them to a young and undignified grave on the vague chance they might be able to return from the Dead. In a certain way these deeds are the much greater sin Albus Dumbledore would have to justify himself before a otherworldly court and judgement compared to his youthful temper and his great and horrible price. especially when seen in the light that the same reasons had already made possible that Voldemort turned dark and came into his power just for the opposite way to read them and feel compelled to do nothing against it. But i'm babbling... i just wanted to show how much i agree with your storyline and the underlying analysises of Dumbledore and his minions and how glad i am that i could read this variant and his many innovative ideas and plot twists. Thank you!

RavenKnight013 posted a comment on Tuesday 27th December 2011 3:58pm for Going Out With a Different Type of Bang

This was... an interesting story to read. I like it, as it's all presented in a way that could conceivably be true and it keeps its pace throughout. I found it funny that Harry had only just discovered the need to marry a separate witch for the Black Family holdings when what was conceivably the perfect choice (in the framework of the story, that is...) almost presented herself on a platter to Harry...
Either way, kudos on a job well done!

Michael10 posted a comment on Wednesday 5th October 2011 4:28pm for Going Out With a Different Type of Bang

Re-read the whole story and its still a great read.

Question: Have you given up writing? as you have several unfinished stories and all of them were awesome. It seems nearly everyone at fanfic has vanished. its sad because finding good HP stories has become dificult. You and Ishtar's stories were great reads and are missed.

Mike

Cassandra30 posted a comment on Tuesday 9th August 2011 9:09am for Going Out With a Different Type of Bang

Totally terrific!