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IamNotawriter posted a comment on Thursday 10th October 2019 8:30pm for Practice Makes Perfect

Looking at the posting date vs when I read it, this may be a moot point, but I thought it was a fine read. It had a plot that worked, it had enough tastefully done sex to be titillating, without being overbearing, or so disjointed that it became a series of sex scenes with little or no connecting thread.

Ronald8472 posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2018 4:05pm for Practice Makes Perfect

I don't understand why this story got any bad reviews it was great.

Sepp131 posted a comment on Sunday 27th August 2017 11:34am for Practice Makes Perfect

Nice, i like it. especially the end

Noble Korhedron posted a comment on Sunday 27th September 2015 1:46pm for Practice Makes Perfect

Oh Lord; I'm not sure if Ginny's completely in-character, but the lime was juicy and the Muggle jokes quite rib-tickling!!

Noble Korhedron posted a comment on Sunday 15th June 2014 1:43am for Practice Makes Perfect

Oh man, this is complete. crackfic!! :-D

Natalie posted a comment on Friday 28th February 2014 5:12am for Practice Makes Perfect

i'm not a harry/ginny fan and i thought this was prety good.

The Great Phoenix posted a comment on Sunday 25th August 2013 8:32pm for Practice Makes Perfect

The smut itself was good, but if you weren't going for OOC then I can see why people would react negatively. I'm sorry, I don't want to say anything bad, I usually like or really like your work, but the part where they confess their love for each other and make love was really, really cheesy. I also find it impossible to believe that Harry would openly divulge to everyone he meets that he and Ginny had sex, no matter how happy he is, especially because "there's probably a rule about it somewhere and I would hate to ever break any rule ever." The hospital scene I was able to put down as 'crackfic' and enjoy more.

The quality of your work is usually above this. I could read it again, it's not unbearable--you actually handled the challenge pretty well, it was just after that that things went down--but I won't go looking for it. Also, quick question: I may have been overthinking it, but it sounded like you were hinting at Harry feeling Ginny's sensations toward the end of their first round?

potterfrkintx posted a comment on Thursday 1st August 2013 1:46pm for Practice Makes Perfect

quite humorous

Tim Sullivan posted a comment on Thursday 11th July 2013 11:24pm for Practice Makes Perfect

Just re-read this and it always makes me smile

Kara posted a comment on Sunday 14th April 2013 5:52pm for Practice Makes Perfect

That's one way to off ol' Moldy...

kstchr posted a comment on Friday 1st March 2013 10:16pm for Practice Makes Perfect

Very cool! It's been a long time since I've read a good sexy story with Harry & Ginny as the main characters, and I really enjoyed this one. Since Ginny is 16 in this one, I assume it's a little AU since Harry's still at school when he's 17? No matter to me, I really liked this. The only thing I would've preferred was a bit more kissing before they got "busy" in the shower, but I thought this was very well done!

Nytefyre posted a comment on Thursday 28th February 2013 12:00pm for Practice Makes Perfect

Fun and inventive - it might have been interesting to know a bit more about what Harry was seeing/feeling when it was echoing, but I think we can draw our own conclusions, too.

Thanks for posting.

billbrinkley posted a comment on Saturday 15th December 2012 1:38pm for Practice Makes Perfect

I can't believe you only got 2 positives out of fifty on this story. I liked it. It was a great diversion. Thanks for posting it. It just proves the adage; one man's trash is another's treasure.

Lia1 posted a comment on Friday 19th October 2012 8:16am for Practice Makes Perfect

Cute :) I liked this one!

MinnieMcGee posted a comment on Monday 9th July 2012 12:51pm for Practice Makes Perfect

This was a great fic! ^^ Dunno why anyone would have something bad to say about this...

Ironhair posted a comment on Friday 13th April 2012 8:30pm for Practice Makes Perfect

Hell, I liked the smut and the end. It wasn't bad as u made it out to be...

lwj2 posted a comment on Friday 16th December 2011 8:17am for Practice Makes Perfect

I liked it, I can't see what the whinging you mentioned was about. Yes, there's sex in it -- it's a well-written scenario. You did manage to instill a plot, the fact that this is a short rather than a novel is immaterial.

And for what it's worth, I do wish you'd go back to the one you abandoned (My Father's Image) and complete it, it's quite intriguing.

Thanks for writing this.

LWJ2

Dustin Hoeppner posted a comment on Wednesday 20th April 2011 11:25pm for Practice Makes Perfect

I love this story

alexrc55 posted a comment on Thursday 30th September 2010 11:13pm for Practice Makes Perfect

this has to be my absolute favorite method of killing voldemort

alexrc55 posted a comment on Thursday 30th September 2010 11:00pm for Practice Makes Perfect

this has to be my absolute favorite method of killing voldemort i have ever seen