My Father's Image
By Kinsfire
loveit so far
ill read the rest wheni get back form my walk with my dad and siblings
great chapter please update soon
Wow! Harry is pulling out all the stops. At least Dumbledore is starting to act like he might care for Harry. I guess time will tell. Thanks for the story and please keep writing.
Well there are some big mistakes in the story in my opinion. 1st, when Harry arived at Sirius's place and Harry telling Dumbledore about Gringotts letters. 2nd, when Harry got back from Gringotts and talked to Dumbledore and Snape, why did he only threaten Snape after the curse and not cut him open and he refers to Dumbledore as sir. As he is the heir of 2 founder why not use that to kick Snape and Dumbledore out of Hogwarts staff and so on.
Snape shoulda KNOWN better. He has just a wand; Harry's packing both a wand AND a knife (that doubles as a backup wand). Some Duelling Master HE is. (And he wants to teach Defense? And Harry's nearly turned him into potion ingredients *twice*?) As bad as Snape fared, Tom's Run Of Bad Luck is now *Officially Worse*! Salazar's own Vault says *NYET* to his being the Heir, and passes it to (horror of horrors for Tom) *Harry*, The-Boy-Who's-Giving-Tom-An-O-fer. If Gringott's ever leaks THIS news.....
Harry's got a set of brass ones big enough to hang to the floor. I personally think in this context that his anger is more than justified. I like a strong Harry. Keep up the good work.
Pretty good. I didn't expect the knife attack, but sure liked it. The way you wrote it was perfect, nothing, then a knife in him.
awesome pure brilliance