Merle Corey posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd August 2006 12:07pm for Masquerade

I enjoyed this lighter turn of yours, and sneaky!Harry. Let's not forget elven-goddess!Hermione. That's one element that I don't think enough stories have... Is there an epilouge kicking around your hard drive?

djo posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd August 2006 5:01pm for Masquerade

nice one - you shouldn't have waited with posting it!

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd August 2006 9:53am for Masquerade

And here we have a GOOD demonstration of what happens when you ASSUME...you make an ASS of U and ME...and in this case the skewerees were *Cho Chang* and *Hermione Granger*! A downright *sneaky* piece of FLUFF and Cuteness.

I love it, Keith!

Particle_Accelerator posted a comment on Monday 21st August 2006 2:33am for Masquerade

It was cute - I really liked it. Thought the speech patterns were a bit stilted though, but you pointed out thathe learned how to talk differently for the ball. Well done!

Gardengirl posted a comment on Monday 21st August 2006 1:09am for Masquerade

Awww. How... fluffy! It's a bit of a change from your usual angsty intensity - I like it! Thanks for sharing.

Tatterdemalion posted a comment on Sunday 20th August 2006 7:22pm for Masquerade

Good story. Makes me wonder how many unusual pairings could hook up through mistaken identities in a masquerade ball. Harry/Millicent, anyone?

Donald McLeod posted a comment on Sunday 20th August 2006 5:19pm for Masquerade

Very good, Ilike the flow of the story and choice of costumes.

Padfoot posted a comment on Sunday 20th August 2006 3:58pm for Masquerade

Big, long

Awwwwww......


Nice fluff. And Ron as the Stag..very nice. Maybe make Harry's identity secret longer to hold up the suprise. But other than that..very nice

IceBlades posted a comment on Sunday 20th August 2006 3:41pm for Masquerade

wow, that was a great lil ficlet. I figured it would be Ron under the mask at first. Also, I love Cho's reaction when she sees that it is Ron she has been snogging all night...LOL

Great story

LoggingInSucksAss posted a comment on Sunday 20th August 2006 1:22pm for Masquerade

Fun little morsel. Have to grammar Nazi over this part though:

"He chuckled as he realized how obvious the silver stag mask was. Cho was obviously trying to make up with Harry. He didn't seem to be fighting it too much."

If I am correct then, grammatically, the "He" in the second sentence refers to the Harry in the previous sentence, -not- the person in the stag mask. Replacing "He" with "Her partner" or something similar would both be grammatically correct and still retain a semblance of secrecy. Replace "He" with "Stag boy" or some other snarky reference and perhaps readers will be mislead into thinking the narrator is Malfoy. :P

Must. Turn. Off. The. Beta. Gene.
(whips out cordless drill like that scene in Pi)

Tommy posted a comment on Sunday 20th August 2006 12:38pm for Masquerade

... You're good! Not many can brag of a story that makes boys grin like crazy in the "how cute!" sense... *amused*.

If you have similar stories saved on your computer, I certainly wouldn't mind reading them!

Ta'ta!

Tommy A. L.
aka
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scott2 posted a comment on Sunday 20th August 2006 12:14pm for Masquerade

Awwww, so cute!

KyuubiNaru posted a comment on Sunday 20th August 2006 9:11am for Masquerade

This is so sweet...awwww

Philipe posted a comment on Sunday 20th August 2006 8:32am for Masquerade

Nah.. Don't know.. It was nice, but nothing of your caliber.. Your work usualy i much better then this one.. Sorry for the opinion..

I thought that it lacked a bit of story, and a little more lengh for it to work..

P.

MaryJane6707 posted a comment on Sunday 20th August 2006 8:32am for Masquerade

Oh, this was so sweet and romantic! I just love when then end up together! Cho and Ron, that is an unusual pairing, but it totally worked.

Al posted a comment on Sunday 20th August 2006 6:12am for Masquerade

:-), It is always nice to see Harry tapping into his Slytherin side.

johnapple posted a comment on Sunday 20th August 2006 5:43am for Masquerade

Very kool.I liked it very much. Thank you for sharing.

Zaxxon posted a comment on Sunday 20th August 2006 5:18am for Masquerade

Very nice... curious when this is set, and what happens afterwards.

Princess Fictoria posted a comment on Sunday 20th August 2006 4:43am for Masquerade

awwww!!!! totally cool! Loved it very much.... makes me wonder if harry and ron were in on it together

Bells posted a comment on Sunday 20th August 2006 4:29am for Masquerade

i like it. its an interesting idea. at the moment i'm not in a very fluffy romantic mood, so my reaction to the ending was sorta "eeeh, little too mushy there..." but im sure that if i was looking for something more romantic-like, this would be just SPECTACULAR. i like it alot. as well as the concept for the masquerade. i've seen several masquerade stories, but i've never seen one that actually has the characters not have any idea who the others are. well, in some ways... the cho was obvious like you said, but for example the ron-harry thing was great :D