Harry Potter and the Paradigm Shift
By Kinsfire
Cool cool. Interesting twist with the rape thing. Poor Harry.
Regardless of whatever happened to him, if she wants it and he is as set to pleasing her as he seems to be, I think he would do it. Of course, the main factor of my argument is that she wants it, and is deriving pleasure from it, then there is really no problem with it. Hell, maybe they could pass it off as helping him get over his issues. Although, running off to Albus about this is rather childish I think. I mean, she's an auror. If there is an issue with the law (which there probably is) she needs to go to her office and have them go through whatever procedures they have for it. If they, for whatever reason, don't want to go that route, then just do it themselves. They do have magic after all.
OOOOK. The one thing that was totally crap for brains about this chapter was the whole Harry being raped by Dudley and his gang. Instead of all the he and Tonks should've explored the back door penetration game. I mean c'mon...what 15 year old wouldn't be interested in that...especially with a 21 year old??? Again, I liked the chapter except for that bit. Onto the next....
Thank you for ruining a good story by adding a completly ridiculus rape in there. Their is no way in hell that Harry would ever allow that to happen he would probably resort to using magic knowing that he would be expelled, but he would never let that happen, the idea is fucking dumb! You seem to forget how strong Harry is!
Thank you for ruining a good story by adding a completly ridiculus rape in there. Their is no way in hell that Harry would ever allow that to happen he would probably resort to using magic knowing that he would be expelled, but he would never let that happen, the idea is fucking dumb!
Damn!! Dudley and his goons are sick! I hope that something happens to them soon, because I so really want to kick their ass!!
Nice job so far. Keep it up!
You are portraying two people deeply in love both physically and emotionally with such great clarity that it makes my heart ache that there are too few examples of it in the real world. You're showing us this beautiful, wonderful and rare sight in such a caring way all wrapped up in the HP universe. Thank you.
A Spider fan? Writing HP fics? My life is complete. A marvellous line; Mickey Finn and Harry should never meet - the combined angst might create a black hole or something. My copy of Off the Wall is rarely away when I'm writing; there's so much useful stuff in it for every occasion. Cracking so far; I'll leave a proper review at the end. May I expect some more stinkers?
Well, I am not going to lie when I say that the rape thing with dud threw me off the story. I mean it might be leading up to something in the plot, but since I haven't read the whole story then I can't be sure, but i'll keep reading.