Harry Potter and the Paradigm Shift
By Kinsfire
What is Sisyphean effort?
Dumbledore is in cahoots (great word) with Voldemort now? Wow, I'm fascinated. I can't wait to read on. Ahh, another task for another day...
What is with the bazillion monologues in this story? Harry keeps raving on with 3000 word long monologues everytime someone asks him something.
Other then that the only things which really irritated me were the 3,879,284 concidences which makes everything fit in perfectly. There is NO problems in this story, not a single one really. And the
characters are all way way too... understanding, i mean seriously, even if you loved your friends it doesnt mean you'd have no problem with your girlfriends/boyfriends sleeping with them. Its
ridiculous.
I recommend that you do a little reading about NaNoWriMo at http://www.nanowrimo.org - that should explain quite a bit of it for you. A hint - the motto of the contest is "Quantity, not
Quality." It was my attempt to write 100,000 words in a single month.
If it's good in some people's eyes, that's wonderful. If it's not, at least I got to 95,000 words before the month was out.
It's not to everyone's taste. Nothing anyone writes is to everyone's taste.
Well, it looks like Harry's achieved that sexual maturity I was hoping for in a previous review.
The spy being Dumbledore is kind of what I fighred given his being so manipulative and who died on his way to being Minister. Keep up the good work.
