starflare posted a comment on Tuesday 12th January 2016 8:07pm for Chapter 1

love it hope you update soon,

Jamey posted a comment on Wednesday 18th September 2013 5:12pm for Chapter 1

Do you plan to post the rest of this here as well as on FiMFiction?

bratling posted a comment on Thursday 11th July 2013 5:15am for Chapter 1

My Little Pony , Keith? Really? Only reason I know anything about it is my five-year-old niece is hooked one it... and as a result, I can sing most of the songs! That said, I'd wondered why everything suddenly seemed fine when it shouldn't have been. But hey, it's written for kids...

Nytefyre posted a comment on Wednesday 6th March 2013 11:24pm for Chapter 1

Good point - and would be nice to see how it was resolved, though it seems facile on the face of it.

Thanks for posting.

Jamey posted a comment on Sunday 24th February 2013 12:17pm for Chapter 1

Not bad - I admit, I'm no brony, but I don't mind the occasional MLP:FiM fic. I find this suggestive, however, of why I am not a brony: I was pushed into watching the first two episodes of the first season, and found the way Twilight Sparkle was treated was most reprehensible. She was severely mushroomed by her Mentor, and in general, disregarded as possibly having anything of real importance to present.

Sounds like something very similar happened in the episodes this is based on. I like Twilight Sparkle - I find MLP:FiM in general, though, less than entertaining.

Jonathan Northwood posted a comment on Friday 22nd February 2013 3:40am for Chapter 1

Nicely done, my fellow brony. If this is the beginning of your story, then I'm definitely looking forward to how this plays out.

Mathew McCrillis posted a comment on Thursday 21st February 2013 12:42am for Chapter 1

This looks like a very interesting story, the episode did seem very rushed on the topic of emotional damage.

Cheers~!