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Patches posted a comment on Thursday 21st August 2014 6:22pm for A New Beginning

This is an excellent beginning. Dumbledore is definitely bad in this one. He must know that Harry is being beaten at Privet Drive. I'm glad Hermione figured out that Dumbledore had her under the imperious. Now maybe she will help Harry if she finds him. I look forward to more of this story. p

thetaxzombie posted a comment on Monday 27th August 2012 3:02pm for A New Beginning

Hermione not being able to throw off the Imperious until the MOB tells her to hurt Harry makes since. It makes the letter she sent earlier in the chapter believable.

I'm more of a fan of Tonks Remus being on Harry's side but not all that bothered when they switch sides. It makes for a change of pace.

That the Goblins are thick with Bumblebore is also a change of pace. Seems like 90%+ of the tales where they are involved have them plotting with Harry on how to put one over on him. Or at least the ones I've read.

A good solid opening chapter. The stage is set, now on with the play.

Cassandra30 posted a comment on Tuesday 9th August 2011 7:19am for A New Beginning

Wonderful! This sounds like a good story. I am glad that Hermione figured out she's been spelled. I hope Katjie helps Harry.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Sunday 15th August 2010 8:38pm for A New Beginning

Very good start.

gunny

Ginny Tracy posted a comment on Sunday 7th March 2010 11:32am for A New Beginning

In addition to you usual great writing and interesting story lines, I fell for this story as soon as the young lady in Amsterdam introduced herself. My late aunt was name Kaatje Vliet :-)

jhbwolverine posted a comment on Thursday 28th January 2010 8:16pm for A New Beginning

I'd give it about a 3/10. Like most of your stories, Harry is a perpetual victim of just about everyone else in the world (except the 15 women who he is desperately in love with). He's abused by Snape, Dumbledore, and his non-magical relatives. The one person who doesn't abuse him is Voldemort, and it's hard to understand why Harry doesn't join him to be honest, given the way those on the 'light' side treat him. In short, the story is incredibly unrealistic and is literally painful to read.

joeBob posted a comment on Wednesday 27th January 2010 2:18am for A New Beginning

Is this a repost? I'd swear I've read this before. The plot is extremely cliched, but the story's still fun.
"Pookie-pie" is always good. ;-)

Slytherin66 posted a comment on Monday 25th January 2010 4:34pm for A New Beginning

This was a good chapter a nice start to a good story I hope Albus and his Order suffer for all they have done.

Wolf550e posted a comment on Thursday 21st January 2010 2:29pm for A New Beginning

Was this written more than 5 years ago? Otherwise, very cliche.

Darak1 posted a comment on Thursday 21st January 2010 2:27pm for A New Beginning

So basically in England its Dark versus Dark.

Fenris Ulf posted a comment on Thursday 21st January 2010 2:18pm for A New Beginning

Awesome start to a new story! Can't wait to see more.

Thanks for writing!

Carol Layland posted a comment on Thursday 21st January 2010 2:16pm for A New Beginning

Oh yes, I do like this. Harry on the loose and going to the very head of the magical money controllers. Please, please update this as soon as possible. Carol layland

Nekura Enzeru posted a comment on Thursday 21st January 2010 11:43am for A New Beginning

Well written start to a new fic...doesn't waste time with an overly descriptive paragraph, jumps straight into the thick of things. Surprised but pleased to see a new take on Harry's 'compulsory' trip to Gringrotts after escaping--good to see a manipulative Dumbledore who isn't caught completely off guard and actually has contingencies in place.

Don't know about the woman Harry met though--strangers, and already deciding to share a meal, just like that? Would've been good to see a bit more build up in that regard.

Looking forward to seeing what makes this betrayal-fic unique. Got some good potential here, and I hope it pans out well.

Cliff Bryner posted a comment on Thursday 21st January 2010 10:50am for A New Beginning

I'm going to enjoy this story. Please do me a favor, and put this high on your priority list. I find that my 60 years have not made me a patient person. Old age must be overrated. Peace.

GremlinXTJ posted a comment on Thursday 21st January 2010 9:06am for A New Beginning

Huh ... well this is an interesting angle.
I wonder how else is "evil".

Dave Harris posted a comment on Thursday 21st January 2010 9:05am for A New Beginning

Laughed at Miss "Caught You High Tailing".

The whole Hermione suddenly realises she's been under the Imperius (speeled correctly for once!) thing seemed a bit quick. Some background might have been useful.

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Thursday 21st January 2010 6:52am for A New Beginning

It's always a pleasure to read your writings, and this is no different. Well done & thanks.

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Thursday 21st January 2010 6:22am for A New Beginning

Really enjoyed this start, and was glad to see that not everyone seems to be against Harry, though it sure looks like Dumbledore is a right jerk there. Will be curious how the meeting with the Gnomes go, if Hermione is on the up and up with her confession, and what all it will mean for Harry, especially since the Goblins are just basically jerks who aren't anywhere near as helpful as we'd like to wish they could be at times.

Riven posted a comment on Thursday 21st January 2010 6:21am for A New Beginning

i like this, is this a one shot or a multi chapter fic? and if it is multi chapter are you going to continue it?

i only ask because it has been a LONG time sence you have updated any of your stories that i thought you had given up fan fiction

PamelaC posted a comment on Thursday 21st January 2010 4:25am for A New Beginning

UM ??? I've read this, not too long ago I think. You sure you didn't post it?